I'm just a dreamer
I dream my life away
i'm just a dreamer
Who dreams of better days
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Ok, Emerald here for a review.
First off I would like to say that you probably didn't take much time in this, It's pretty much just a word repeating over and over again, like Whales.All your lines have a capitol letter at the beginning except for the first one. Take more time with your writings if you want more people to read it. And like I said, don't make most of your poem a repeating word!
Capitalization doesn't matter in poetry. Poetry basically defies all rules of grammar.
Ok,here to review.
You shouldn't make random stuff up just to post it for giggles. YWSers have to review this stuff and it makes it harder if you aren't serious
Ok, so I'm guessing that you purposely spelled 'poem' wrong? In the title I mean.
-Ok, so if you are going to have every line with a Capitol letter, you should at the very least make the first line capital as well.
Im not going to try to ask about the whales and wonder why someone said you failed.
Welcome to YWS and try to take writing more seriously,
-lost
Okay, so I'll read.,
Okay, so you're the kind of guy who loves school, huh?
Haha.,
Anyway, you shouldn't mess around in YWS., :/
We write stuff for others to read.,
Hope to see something to read from you soon.,
*-rock.on.,
This review was made before he edited it.,
U mean she
oh my., o.O ., qowee, i didn't know.,
peace.,
Sorry I was just was just messing round