Dreami

Lol, I know what you mean. I can also get in a mood where I am mature beyond my age. I also think that nowdays kids are more mature than ...

Good! I always seem to be editing them lol!

Black Rose, I love how you donate all your poems to others. Its so nice that you really write for a good reason. Anyways, the only thing I see wrong ...

okay, like what words, cause reading it, I see what you mean.

amazing! :) didn't see any problems. :D Really like it.

okay, I editied it, thanks for suggestions! :D

wow, thanks for the great comments :D At first I really didn't think it was that great, but I liked it more and more as I read it :D

The first line, "What Is" could be tooken out. It is just a destraction, and makes it very nice.If you wanted to keep that in there, have "What Is...What Is ...

powerfully sad. It is an amazing poem, even if it is depressing. It really triggers a love for humanity.

good for one of those early morning poems.ROFL!I really liked it!Good Job!

Keep up this great work!

very nice, as everyone else said, you can really visualize it and feel it. Keep up these nice poems, you are really great!

nice! :D I agree, can't find anything worth changing! It is really nice in winter here, as it reminds us of summer.

Tears cascade down my upset face, as I know I just want to live invisibly. But everything around won't let that be cause they all know; somewhere inside,I have dreams. ...

I just wanna get by but I have dreams higher than the sky I feel I can be anything I want to be but everything 'round seems to be sound ...