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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: word search poem

    When you don't count drowning becomes easier. Dear Author... Who are you, so wise in the ways of LIFE?.. I honstly love when people touch topics like this one. Life ...

    Aug 23, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Ungifted

    So. Good day to you, Author. I'm here for a small... Okay, for a big review. I hope you don't get all my notes too close to the heart and ...

    Aug 23, 2020
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: "You know. Don't you?"

    So. What do I see here? I nice example of prose that tells us about a character's inner conflicts and the way the character solves them. Some authors don't really ...

    Jul 12, 2020
  • Poetry » Narrative, Lyrical Re: Spinster

    The title hooked my attention as I saw it, because I must admit I haven't met the word Spinster in a very long while. But I also must admit that ...

    Jul 12, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Teen Fiction Re: Soldiers of the Blood: Chapter 1

    So. Review time, innit? I like first chapters, that I've mentioned a long time before... Somewhere. I was speaking of why first chapters are one of the most interesting parts ...

    May 31, 2020
  • Poetry » General, General Re: You, You - It's All about You

    It surprises me how unfamiliar I am with a situation like that. As a teenager, I also would have something like these conversations with my parents very often. Way too ...

    May 3, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Chapter- 1 One spring night

    You know, I always like the first movies in franchises, sometimes much more than other movies. And just as well as that I like the first chapters in books. The ...

    Apr 28, 2020
  • Short Story » Dramatic, Romantic Re: Blue or Grey

    I've always been interested in things like love relationships in literature. It's a funny thing to explore: how people behave near those who they care for, or what they say, ...

    Apr 27, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 34

    Chapter 34 is not the best part to start reading the book with, actually. But what you can get from a chapter 34 is... curiousity. I've got very interested in ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Teen Fiction, Action / Adventure Re: Corrupted Courage Chapter 1

    I've never been able to construct good descriptions, those that are to be really interesting, you know, those you don't get tired of when reading. Usually I don't have many ...

    Apr 11, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Ace of Hearts [Chapter 2]

    So previously I have said that I really enjoy the story. But now it's time to show my cards and say what exactly I like about it. First, characters. I ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, General Re: Tales of Lani: The Beginning

    So. What have I made out from this part? First, the author has their own world created and developed enough to write a book. That is one of the factors ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Art » Culture, Spiritual Re: Season of Waiting

    My first thought when I saw the word "poem" in this writing description was, "Yeah, more poetry, Drak, more poetry for your soul!" Then, when I saw the form of ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Fantasy Re: Heroes of Valtome, Chapter 3

    Well, dear author, this is much, much better than the first chapter! You definitely make a huge success, and this is absolutely obvious. I must admit that the first paragraph ...

    Mar 31, 2020
  • Short Story » Fantasy, Fantasy Re: Poisoned Apple Part 1

    Mar 30, 2020


As a writer, I'm more interested in what people tell themselves happened rather than what actually happened.
— Kazuo Ishiguro