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Re: word search poem
When you don't count drowning becomes easier. Dear Author... Who are you, so wise in the ways of LIFE?.. I honstly love when people touch topics like this one. Life ...
Aug 23, 2020 -
Re: Ungifted
So. Good day to you, Author. I'm here for a small... Okay, for a big review. I hope you don't get all my notes too close to the heart and ...
Aug 23, 2020 -
Re: "You know. Don't you?"
So. What do I see here? I nice example of prose that tells us about a character's inner conflicts and the way the character solves them. Some authors don't really ...
Jul 12, 2020 -
Re: Spinster
The title hooked my attention as I saw it, because I must admit I haven't met the word Spinster in a very long while. But I also must admit that ...
Jul 12, 2020 -
Re: Soldiers of the Blood: Chapter 1
So. Review time, innit? I like first chapters, that I've mentioned a long time before... Somewhere. I was speaking of why first chapters are one of the most interesting parts ...
May 31, 2020 -
Re: You, You - It's All about You
It surprises me how unfamiliar I am with a situation like that. As a teenager, I also would have something like these conversations with my parents very often. Way too ...
May 3, 2020 -
Re: Chapter- 1 One spring night
You know, I always like the first movies in franchises, sometimes much more than other movies. And just as well as that I like the first chapters in books. The ...
Apr 28, 2020 -
Re: Blue or Grey
I've always been interested in things like love relationships in literature. It's a funny thing to explore: how people behave near those who they care for, or what they say, ...
Apr 27, 2020 -
Re: Emperor's Heir - Chapter 34
Chapter 34 is not the best part to start reading the book with, actually. But what you can get from a chapter 34 is... curiousity. I've got very interested in ...
Apr 26, 2020 -
Re: Corrupted Courage Chapter 1
I've never been able to construct good descriptions, those that are to be really interesting, you know, those you don't get tired of when reading. Usually I don't have many ...
Apr 11, 2020 -
Re: Ace of Hearts [Chapter 2]
So previously I have said that I really enjoy the story. But now it's time to show my cards and say what exactly I like about it. First, characters. I ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: Tales of Lani: The Beginning
So. What have I made out from this part? First, the author has their own world created and developed enough to write a book. That is one of the factors ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: Season of Waiting
My first thought when I saw the word "poem" in this writing description was, "Yeah, more poetry, Drak, more poetry for your soul!" Then, when I saw the form of ...
Mar 31, 2020 -
Re: Heroes of Valtome, Chapter 3
Well, dear author, this is much, much better than the first chapter! You definitely make a huge success, and this is absolutely obvious. I must admit that the first paragraph ...
Mar 31, 2020 - Re: Poisoned Apple Part 1 Mar 30, 2020
