Dracula

I'd just like to say that I love your descriptions of each chapter. Quotes are great for descriptions! Her feet moved closer she was raising her hand, like she was ...

I'm back! hiding his face in the cloak. He had stolen from a rotting body, some kind of animal had ate the crap out of. You don't need a full ...

Yay! This will be my bedtime reading. I've got to be quick, so here's a little review for you.. I like the time lapse inbetween chapters, it isn't awkward for ...

Heya! I'm here to review as I said I would. :) Burrow woke up, his heart bumping, he didn't remember. Anything. I'd suggest that you change to [/i]thumping[/i] as opposed ...

Hello, SnazzyPencil! I haven't read part one and I know I should, but I'm not even meant to be on here so I'm just going to go ahead and review ...

Is this even meant to be a... general other? Haha I have no idea what I should be thinking right now. Is it some sort of science joke or something? ...

Wow. I don't really know how to review this. I don't have any nitpicks at all, so I'm just going to type my thoughts. I hope you'll cry, just maybe ...

Heya! First of all, don't say it's going to be rubbish. No writing is rubbish!! I like your first line, it's a good introduction but that's not what I like ...

Hello! I'm here to review. :) Oh my goodness, there's so many big words that I can't pronounce! This isn't a nitpick, it's good for my learning. These are places ...

Yay!! A Doctor Who fanfic! There aren't enough of them on here. I'm going to write down my thoughts as I read it. :) First of all, I'd like to ...

Heya, Iron! I'm quickly going to read through Citadel and give you my choice. *reads it, comes back* I like this one better, mostly because of all the fantasy things ...

Heya! I'm here to review your work (obviously). :P I'm looking forward to reading it, I love mythology. "¿Por qué me lo das? " I switched to English; remembering that ...

Hello freetowrite! Welcome to the Young Writers Society. :) I've read the first part of your story. It's pretty short as a chapter, but would be perfect for a prologue. ...

Woaaaaah, Jackson is hot headed. In the previous chapters, although he was a 'jerk', he seemed like more of a playful one. You know, those kinds of people who are ...

Hello ancient! Trying to review this is going to be a really tricky job because I couldn't find much to point out. There's only one nitpick and overall it's a ...