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Re: Living in a Dream
Hello and Happy Review Day! I absolutely love dreams so your poem was completely relevant to me. It perfectly tells how some of us turn to dreaming to escape from ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: stitched
Happy Review Day, Arkhaion! This poem is quite emotional and it sends a strong message across. I'm not really sure how to review this, just because I don't have any ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Prologue/ Eyes of Ice, Hair of Fire
Hello again! You probably know that I just the first chapter of your story, so I thought that I should probably get over here and read the prologue. :) Nervous ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: My first encounter .. Pt.1
Hello, Happy Review Day... and welcome to YWS! This part is quite small, so this review won't be very big. I think it was an interesting beginning to the story ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Small Things That Helped Me
Happy Review Day!!! This poem was amazing, not just because of the words you used and the metaphors and your fantastic style of writing, but because it gives hope. You ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Chapter 1/Part 1 (Hair of Fire, Eyes of ice)
Happy Review Day!! I found this story very interesting, I was grabbed by the way you started by saying that something extremely important was about to happen. I have just ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Bally the Talking Dog: 'The RULES'
Happy Review Day! I have a few nitpicks, which I've addressed below... “Got it, Bally?” Grandma asked, after her two hundred and eighty-sixth rule. Two hundred and eighty-six rules? That ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: This Feeling
Ummmmm. That was a big umm. :D Probably because I have no good ideas. I do have ideas, but I've got a feeling that the answer is cryptic. I thought ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Civics Essay. // How did the Constitution guard against tyranny?
Happy Review Day! Hopefully it's not too late to help you, but you actually don't need much help in my opinion. I'm not a teacher and I'm the perfect essay ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Depression
I love it! You have described depression in so many ways and they are all relevant and very creative. I don't really have many nitpicks, I don't have any at ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Lady Winter
Woah, this a great poem! I went through three different stages of thinking while I read this. First, I thought it could have been a poem you wrote for a ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Bad Wolf
Hello and Happy Review Day! I'll just start with a few nitpicks. These things didn't really sound right to me: Your once perfect smile is more wild . Smile and ...
Jan 25, 2015 -
Re: Hook. Chapter 4.
I haven't read the previous chapters... sorry! But I'll still try and write a good review. Ares woke on a hard surface to a roar of laughed It should say ...
Jan 21, 2015 -
Re: Laser Cat II: Flipped
Hello! Before I read this story I'm just going to let you know about paragraphs. There sre only two paragraphs in this and they are big and chunky which discourages ...
Jan 21, 2015 -
Re: Alone Once More
A girl sits at her window, she hasn't smiled in a while. The rain is pounding on the ground outside and she watches as raindrops slide down her window. The ...
Jan 21, 2015
