Dracula

Hello, D4RKR4VEN! Happy Review Day, well, what's left of it at least. :) When reading your story I was really impressed by your writing style. It was simple yet told ...

Heya, Kymohens!! Happy Review Day. :D I slide my ID across the scanner on our apartment. “Emma Weaver. Permanent resident with undenied access,” the HomeMonitor reports cheerfully. The door opens ...

Hello, brielle! Happy Review day. :) I can’t sleep at night Because you’re all in my head. Aren't you talking about just one person? If so, the all isn't necessary, ...

I don't have any nitpicks at all. This is such a creative piece and it was so enjoyable to read! You don't need me to tell that it was fantastic, ...

Hello, Wasabi! Happy Review Day. :) As soon as I saw the title I knew that I had to read this. I love fantasy, fairytale sorts of stories so I ...

Here I am once again, to face the forces of darkness, of Chaos, of... reviewing! Okay, I'll get straight to it. Maybe I was a puny weakling... This isn't a ...

Hey, wisegirl! I always love reading your chapters on Review Day. They're fun and are a much needed break from more serious works. :) We didn't know that the person ...

Hello and Happy Review Day! I'm surprised that not many people reviewed this work earlier in the day, smaller works go first. I think it might be because there's nothing ...

Hello, Seraphinaxx! Happy Review Day. :) There is literally nothing wrong that I can find with this chapter. So instead of writing a detailed review about errors, I'll point out ...

Hello and Happy Review Day! I have not one nitpick to complain about. This story is so sweet and the little girl seems so cute. You wrote the story in ...

Hey! I'm back. :) After she left the pool, I got back into the main pool and hung out with my ‘friends’ for a while. This sentence is too repetitive. ...

Hello and Happy Review Day! I just started college. Jay University in Nashville, Tennessee. High school had been a very stressful time in my life. I was depressed and suicidal ...

Hello, Panda11! Hapy Review Day! I'll do my best to write a good review, hopefully it will help you somehow. :) Crystal raced through the empty halls, she could hear ...

We had a day of fun, at the lake’s bay. We will never forget, that hot summer day. ...This is for English by the way. Did you realise that you ...

Hello and Happy Review Day! We were in my garden. I’d ditched my uniform for brown overalls and a white shirt, both mud-stained. I was lifting the flowers from their ...