Dracula

I really like the formatting. It's certainly not something I see often, and I think it's an accident, but I really like it. I don't know why. I came here ...

before you and your friend will burn!" Will is not necessary. That is my only nitpick! I loved this chapter. Your style of writing is simple but it gets everything ...

calling to the figures in the mist. “Sophie!” Sure enough, as the dust cleared, This isn't anything major, but if you're editing everything to the max then you might like ...

Wow. Just by reading that opening paragraph, I can tell that I really like your style of writing. :D It reminds of of Jessie Burton's style in The Miniaturist (and ...

Off to camp ? I'm getting excited!! "Jaz, ambrosia is the food of the gods. It heals demigods as well. What do you think would happen if a Titan ate ...

Hey, glade! Nice username, glader. ;) There's just a few things I'd like to point out. Now I’m sitting here being integrated by a person I use to know. By ...

You shall definitely get feedback from me. Welcome to YWS! :D The first paragraph sounds awesome. I get the feeling that this is going to be a sort of sci-fi ...

Hey, faunafaun! I love your username. :D The beginning of your prologue is awesome. It is pretty mysterious and makes me want to read on. They way she dressed, it ...

Hello! You've written another fantastic chapter. I only have two very minor nitpicks... She could hear the voices of the people chanting something, as they were dancing around the fire. ...

Because your first chapter sounded so exciting, I've come to read your next! This will be fun. :D There are just a few things to fix... At the start, you ...

Hello! I love Alice in Wonderland so I bet I'll love this story too! First I'll look at nitpicks, then I'll tell you what I liked. She was still was ...

Hello, Rose0Thorn! I'm here to review. :) For a prologue, the length is okay. However, the first chapter is quite short. I know this is only one part of it, ...

Hello, QueenAnne! I'm here to review. :D I've found a few nitpicks which need editing, but other than that your chapter was fine! I toss a coin to the barkeep ...

Heya, EscapeToNeverland! You've got a lovely poem here. I'll quickly get through one little nitpick, then I'll tell you what I liked. I'm learning how to live again. I'm trying ...

Hello, sociohat!! He dreamt of it again: a glimpse of a memory engraved. Chaos is motion. This mansion, which was once a symbol of power and acclaim, has been reduced ...