Dracula

Hey there, liam212! I thought this was a really sweet piece, with a fairy-tale touch to it. However, I'm wondering if this is actually a chapter or just a short ...

Hey there, tigershark19! Thanks for sharing this poem with everyone, I enjoyed reading it. Your thoughts and emotions come across really clearly. I loved the simplicity of your 'reasons' such ...

Ha ha ha ha ha ha. Can I add just one more ha? I thought this was going to be a really personal, beautiful declaration of love. AND IT WAS! ...

Hey there, muazzamnasir20! A big, friendly welcome to the Young Writers Society! :D The first thing I noticed without even beginning to read is that you haven't used paragraphing in ...

Hey there! I'm here to review your prologue. :) My best friend stood next to me, shivering, tucking her hands under her armpits. We stood next to each other, not ...

Hey there, JackdawRC. Welcome to the Young Writer's Society! Her unbrushed hair was like wind as it bounced of her back. I like the descriptive way you began this piece, ...

Hey there, igotthesauce! I read chapter one, so I figured I should come on over and review chapter two for you. :) The Empty streets of Azure Town quickly became ...

Hey there, mavisknightley! I absolutely love flash fiction so I couldn't skip over this when I saw it in the Green Room. And I have to say that you didn't ...

Hey there, tammy777. Is this based on a real holiday you went on, or is it fictional? I always find personal recounts interesting, so I thought I'd check this out. ...

Hey there, JuliasSneezer! I'm here to review. :) The monkey, it was summer vacation. She pulled her silk covers up to her chin. Wait. Silk? She had itchy cotton! She ...

Hey there, spartan! I'm here to review. :) As I walked through the gladicks, I came across a strange creature with horns and wings. The creature rawred at me then ...

Hey there, igotthesauce! I started slicing n' dicing-killing and blood everywhere! I really like the colloquial language you use, it makes for an informal, almost comedic story. But I can ...

Hey there, desdemona. :) Walter Boggs. Would she never have a moment’s rest from these memories? I always like to comment on the way people begin their chapters, and I ...

Hey there, AnarchyWolf! I'll focus my review more on editing and grammar nitpicks since I haven't read all the previous parts, but I'll do my best to comment on character ...

Hey there, joallover! This is a beautiful poem, that's all I need to say. You've captured every single emotion perfectly, using lovely language and form. My own grandfather has dementia, ...