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Re: Frost Lark News 11/6/16
'Tis Draaaaculaaaaa once more! Now, you may be surprised that it landed on our shores, because you likely were unaware that we even had shores. Well, yes, I have to ...
Nov 7, 2016 -
Re: The New Generation--Chapter 19: Let Go
Hey there, Artemis28! I've not got any errors to point out with this chapter (just one nitpick), it was an easy read and as usual, your plot is well thought-out ...
Nov 5, 2016 -
Re: Frost Lark News 10/31/16
Before I even read this, I am placing a bet that it will be Halloween themed. Something Supernatural is going to happen, am I right? He then closed the news ...
Nov 1, 2016 -
Re: The Elder Scrolls: Escape - Chapter 3.2 ~ Freedom
Hey there, XxXTheSwordsmanXxX, and thank you for tagging me! Vajrasha sat by the fire pit. Her cloak pulled around her protectively as she mended her shirt once again. This is ...
Nov 1, 2016 -
Re: Knowing Gods Chapter 3
Hey there, occymay. I'm here to review on behalf of Team Teamy. :D There it was, like someone had stuck a flamethrower down their throats, burning their inside and killing ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: Missing You
Hey there, aidanzzz, and welcome to the Young Writers Society! I love that you included an image with your story; that's something which is rarely done and it adds a ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: Berlin Fall [Part One]
Haaaayy, Codaaaayy. :D I'm here to review on behalf of Team Teamy. If any of the Stasi was in the eyesight of Anton, they would've laughed at his poor attempt ...
Oct 30, 2016 -
Re: Erick's Journal Entries 10/17-10/23
Hey, Sheyren. :) I love the Halloween themed avatar. I am Sarah Lynn. I'm also the french girl who moved to this town. And she's also some genius kid who ...
Oct 23, 2016 -
Re: Orlando's Journal Entries 10/9-10/16
I literally have ten minutes until I've got to go to school but I wanted to give a quick review so here I am! I have been telling Skyla she ...
Oct 16, 2016 -
Re: Prophecy of 2016 Chapter 1
Hey there! This has been in the Green Room for a while, so I'm here to review. :) I was very optimistic toward this year......until it finally hits me in ...
Oct 15, 2016 -
Re: Rough Waters
Hey there, Arcenturf. I'm here to review your writing... which is chapter one, or a prologue? Not that it matters really, but I think this is a nice length for ...
Oct 15, 2016 -
Re: The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 3.1 - Freedom
Well, I'm here as you tagged me. And veeery happy to be here. :) Hopefully you haven't gotten sick or frustrated with my style of reviewing; I just like to ...
Oct 14, 2016 -
Re: The Elder Scrolls: Escape ~ Chapter 2.3 - Wildfire (Finale)
Hey again, XxXTheSwordsmanXxX. I'm here to review the next part of your story. :D I need to sleep, he thought.He nestled a little into the bed of hay and closed ...
Oct 13, 2016 -
Re: Skyla's Journal Entries 10/4-10/7
Greetings, 'tis Dracula come to review again. :) There's not much to say about the plot. It's great, you've done an amazing job creating this complex world and situation. i ...
Oct 10, 2016 -
Re: Frost Lark News 10/2/16
Hey there! The votes were tallied yesterday, and the new mayor is Gregory Fitzgerald. As I was copying and pasting the above sentence, I was thinking that I would say: ...
Oct 2, 2016
