DeathBecomesHer

Hello! welcome to YWS! first of all id like to say that this was really good. it really embodies what an anxiety attack feels like to some people and I ...

as soon as I saw panic I haaaad to click. This was really clever and I actually like it a lot. I like how you incorporated a normal-ish life into ...

i LOVE this. I love seeing positivity on here and I hate to admit it but most of the poems on here are depressing AF. I love seeing body positivity ...

Hello! first of all id like to say that I really really really like this. I love the ominous feeling it gives and as someone who loves horror, I can ...

this reminds me of that animation of the glass boy and his mask. Throughout the video, things happen but the mask is there so it seems fine. at the end ...

Hello! I really liked the overall thought of the story but I had some problems with it. The grammar needs a bit of improvement. Some of the spacing and capitalization ...

Do you hear that? that's the sound of my heart breaking into millions of pieces. This. Was. Absolutely. Heartbreaking... and I loved it all. Poems like this, that convey the ...

to quote carol from the walking dead, "i have no idea whats going on in the most wonderful way". i think that explains my emotions towards this very accurately. i ...

honestly, this sounds 100 percent like something I would do. My first go to if I got cheated on is a demon and that's scary XD i mean not really ...

all the sensitive 11 year olds on this website are fuming at the mention of *gasp* alcohol. and frankly, I think its hilarious (not the poetry of course). so let's ...

As a former Christian, it was very easy to recognize what this poem is about. I'm not too close-minded to recognize that the wording and imagery in this poem is ...

Oooooooooooooo I love this. it really gives the image of grace and almost makes me imagine a ice dancer. the way they glide over the ice with such confidence is ...

at first, I thought I read selfishy and I was like "that is my new favorite word" but alas... it was actually selfishly. I'm going to swallow my disappointment and ...

you should write songs for a band or something because this is hella good XD. I've been seeing a lot of poems that start out dark and have a nice ...

wow.... I am in awe. 99.9% of the poetry about self-hate and depression always end in giving in to the darkness but...this was different. It's inspiring, it's not the usual ...