Deanie

I found this poem very true. Sorry doesn't mean anything any more, it's literally just a word. I love how you made that very clear in the poem. "Sorry, I ...

I really like this poem! It shows the longing of this person, and she seems to have waited such a long time she's lacking hope and angry and despair are ...

Okay... a few things with this poem. I found it really good for a start, but there were two things I am going to fuss about. One I can't stand, ...

This poem is so sweet! I find it really cute and I love how the counting the minutes until they see each other really makes you notice how strong their ...

I really like this poem. It was very beautiful except there was something I didn't understand. but her skin no longer hangs tightly All her petals have tore That slightly ...

Hmm... Reading this aloud made it sound poetically beautiful but there is one problem. (Maybe its just because this poem is too complicated for my almost empty brain) but I ...

Wow! This is an amazingly deep poem, and it shows true emotions. I love your descriptive words in the first part, especially this: Loneliness is bliss, bitterness is welcomed, and ...

Hey Rubz! I just have to say I throughly enjoyed that poem and totally understand how time is very annoying to some people. I liked how the last lines tied ...

I really like this poem. Many people write about heart break and how their heart gets destroyed or something, but this is a lovely difference to that. I cannot say ...

Wow, a very beautifully written poem. I really like it and I couldn't find a single thing wrong with it. My favourite parts are: I run through their peaceful rain ...

Hey Justtrying! I really like this poem. It is very easy to relate to and I have to say very true. At first I was a little confused after reading ...

Ohmygosh this is such an amazing poem. I love the imagery it creates and everything. I'm not good at looking for mistakes so I'm not much help, but I can ...

I think this poem is really good. I like how there is a connection to black and ink, and it uses all different ways of black. I think the last ...

I know you asked for punctuational help especially, but unless the mistakes are of a certain type (the type my mum told me) I'm totally useless at that. This comment ...

I read each haiku without the spoilers first... feeling a little awkward. The haiku's were great that way, but it meant something totally different when I went back and opened ...