Deanie

Hmm... I feel kinda lukewarm about this poem. I liked it, it was short, sweet and expressed deep emotion, but something confused me. How did you feel the other persons ...

This poem is so true. It is always hard to find real friends. But I think I can tell them apart, fake and real. I am at an international school, ...

Nice poem. I was a little bit disappointed with the ending. It could be a sum up the poem a bit better I think. I only have one other little ...

I don't want a single thing to change in this poem. It is wonderful. And bears and ever so true story. People are looking at perfection as beauty, but what ...

I love this poem. It shows how life is too short. But don't just look at it as a game. It is a really deep, meanigful poem. I think you ...

This poem was short but very sweet. It shows just how much a hug can mean to someone. I didn't even notice it rhymed until I read it through a ...

Lovely poem! I like it a lot. 'kaleidoscope' I don't exactly know why but I kind of find this word funny. For some reason. (I'm just weird like that. ) ...

I REALLY liked this poem. It was completely different from all the others, but it was so beautifully written. It seemesd so magical and enchanting, totally out of this world. ...

Hmmm... this poem was okay. It was good, but comparing it to your other poems it isn't as strong. I think maybe you could have done better. (I hope that ...

I liked this poem. It was shorter than your other one 'Stranger' but they were both connected at in the fact that they were about objects. I think that you ...

I like this poem. It is really well written with beautiful description. I love how you are describing where you live. First you zoom right out, so you are looking ...

Hmm... I like this poem, not as much as your others I have to say. I only have one little correction to make, and apart from that, I liked it. ...

Wow! A very interesting poem. I love how you summed it up with a question. All your poems flow so wonderfully and are so easy to read and understand. Thats ...

Wowee! Totally different type of poem. Cammie, I think you might be crazy because you are the only person who I know who wrote about a traffic light. When I ...

I love this poem! It is really good. But I only have two things to comment on. First, I am wondering what it is she did??? But your poem is ...