Deanie

Hey Shoaib I liked the concept of this poem. It shows how honest the writer is and how they promise never to fake emotions and go behind their back. I ...

Hi Smilykid I feel pretty mixed about this poem. What I like is it's concept, and how the beginning and the last line repeats itself - it makes the poem ...

Hey Forestqueen808 I really like your style of writing. It's really descriptive and pretty. I followed the story happy to know what was happening. What I didn't like was the ...

Heya Dewdrop I liked this poem. As already said, it was simple but it showed a lot of thought and meaning. I like your use of description in the second ...

Hi Threnody I just want to say, I loved this poem. It had such a deep inspiring meaning to it and I'm serious when I say it really moved me. ...

Hey Nightlyowl This was a beautiful poem. I loved the repetitive chorus. It gave a good flow and steady beat to the poem and I all the words flowed perfectly ...

Hey. If this is a haiku I get the message I think you are trying to bring across. You've fallen in love, and now you feel free and happy, using ...

Hey Bluewaterlily, First off, this caught my eye because I love Greek mythology. I think you wrote this beautifully. Your style of writing has a majestic feel to it and ...

Hey Bhayden I would love to criticize this poem but for me, at the moment, absolutely nothing is coming up here. I love the story you seem to easily create ...

Hey Earendil! I just want to say, I really liked this poem. The message it brought was sweet, beautiful and made me feel like I was flying a bit just ...

Wow, that was a good poem. It had a beautiful ryhthm to it and it has very vivid imagery. It was so nice that I personally cannot see anything wrong ...

I really liked this poem! It had a really nice message and it was cute. But there were a few things I would change. In the first stanza you used ...

This is kind of an ironic poem. Its all the things people don't want actually happen and it's like a wake up call to the world. And thats why I ...

Scarli! Okay, I really liked this poem. I could visualize quite a lot with it and I could clearly see the girl you created in my mind. But I didn't ...

Hello! I really liked this poem. It shows someone taking a stand for themselves and being who they are. I think it all flowed well, the story came across really ...