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Hello!
It all seemed to fit. There was one line I would make a little longer though:
I really liked this poem. It shows someone taking a stand for themselves and being who they are. I think it all flowed well, the story came across really good and I like the rhyming
I am not your little toy
I would make that 'because I am not your little toy' to make it seem more even with the rest of the lines.
But it was a really great poem!
Deanie x