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  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: I want to _____

    I think this is a really thoughtful poem, and it's written very well. ^_^ it's very emotional, and I can tell you've put a lot of thought into this. My ...

    Nov 9, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, Realistic Re: Deleted 49

    Wow, this is really cool, and deep and meaningful. I might need a bit of an elaboration, but I take it thay each numeral means its a different story? What ...

    Nov 8, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: 04:25

    Hey! ^_^ this is a really interesting peice, but, are you sure it's a poem? There isn't much of a rhyming scheme, and even though I know a lot of ...

    Nov 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: Sweet Addiction

    Whooo! ^_^ that was an awesome poem. I love how you hint at high's n lows, like the comedown of being a drug addict, and that's really cool. It's a ...

    Nov 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic Re: The Past.

    Wow. This is deep, and very sad. a lot of your poems seem to revert to self-harm. Is there a reason for this, or is that just a theme you ...

    Nov 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Incentive.

    This poem was really cool, though, I wish that you'd expanded on the ideals behind the conflict a little. Why exactly is this person being hated? I don't know why ...

    Nov 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: These Walls

    This was an awesome poem! Most of the stuff that I've been thinking about it has already been said by other people, though, so I'll try not to bore you ...

    Nov 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Sleep.

    Ohohoh! I like this poem, especially the end line, it sounds like somebody's gonna die tonight! Haha. Although, that may just be my own personal interpretation, like how "there's hardly ...

    Nov 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: If.

    Wow. This is deep, and a little sad. It looks like Yiu really put a lot of thought into this, or you've had some personal experiences with that kind of ...

    Nov 8, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Disoriented Horizon

    This is really good! I like how you've formatted it so it's in the middle of the page, too, instead of on the side, like most people do. It's really ...

    Nov 7, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: OMIT

    Aww, this is cool! I mean, it's really sad,as well, but it's cool that you're able to express your sadness so well, and with such emotion! Good job! Awesome! If ...

    Nov 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Drowning.

    This is very good. ^_^ it's written well, and it's It's clever how you talk about drowning, and how it feels like to have someone turn their back on you, ...

    Nov 7, 2014
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Sorry...

    Wow. This was a really good and emotional poem. It looks like you put a lot of thought and effort into it, and it's very creative. It sounds very remorseful, ...

    Nov 7, 2014
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, Teen Fiction Re: I am Matt Bennett

    that is an awesome story. I mean, wow. Pregnant men...cloning...scientists... Murder... It's a big ball of awesome right there. Fantastic job on writing such an awesome story. It's long, but ...

    Nov 6, 2014
  • Short Story » Supernatural, Science Fiction Re: The Dead Body Infront Of Me

    Wow. Well, that was a pretty cool paragraph. I have a few questions, though; how did the person die? Why is there dirt on their face? Who are they? Is ...

    Nov 6, 2014


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