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DarkRavenGrimm

DarkRavenGrimm

  • Poetry » Fantasy, Literature Re: How She Became Chloris(The Nymph of Spring and Flowers)

    I thought this was very entertaining since I too love Greek Mythology and I thought you captured the essence of this myth beautifully. I would say that your use of ...

    Apr 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: Power of the Storm

    This has been an entertaining read and I find that your use of metaphors is very descriptive and wonderfully delightful. I like how you used the storm as a metaphor ...

    Apr 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: The Song of the Mountain King

    I very much enjoyed this poem since I am a fan of the Hobbit book and the movies. I found this to be a very entertaining read. This is pretty ...

    Apr 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: my past is a museum

    I found this piece of work very nice and captivating. I enjoy the imagery for it gave me a very imaginative view on the way I interpret my own memories. ...

    Apr 1, 2015
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Romantic Re: A Faery Seduction

    I just have to say that this poem was wonderfully written and i loved the story. You have a wonderful talent and as I read this I felt the emotion ...

    Nov 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: Tendencies

    This poem is beautifully written and its message is conveyed beautifully. I loved how you described the pain of a first love. The way you describe the character's feelings and ...

    Nov 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Supernatural Re: To Watch and Burn

    This is an amazing poem and i loved the conflict between the demons and the hero. With this poem you can turn it into a really good novel and anything ...

    Nov 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The Flight of the Phoenix

    This is really great poem and i love how it is about my second favorite mythical bird the Phoenix. I can see how this can start a book series it ...

    Nov 5, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Supernatural Re: Death Becomes Her

    This is a suspenseful poem and a little dark but I like it none the less. This piece shows the fear of change and i just have to say I ...

    Nov 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Fanfiction, Fantasy Re: My Amateur FanFic - Misty Mountains

    This is a great work of art and a great twist of the fandom. It is also great to see a fan of the Lord of the Rings and the ...

    Nov 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Supernatural Re: Got You

    That is a pretty good horror poem and I love how the end brings out that surprise. Love how the end came at you i have to know if she ...

    Nov 4, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Fantasy Re: The Prophecy.

    This was a great poem and i simply fell in love with this piece. My favorite line " A stranger in my friend's body makes no sound." i loved the ...

    Oct 30, 2013
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Supernatural Re: I, The Witch

    This poem was deep and i really like this work. My favorite line was "The witch will die, but her soul will last. She will be free! She will feel ...

    Oct 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: In the End

    This is a really great poem and it is a art of vision. I love the lines "Your life written in stone, Far away from your home. The door now ...

    Oct 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Horror, Supernatural Re: Alone

    This poem was really good and a little spooky but still great. My favorite stanza was "I am gone, A black shadow, No more, Alone.". This really a good piece ...

    Oct 25, 2013


There are more things in heaven and earth, Horatio, than are dreamt of in your philosophy.
— William Shakespeare