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Re: How She Became Chloris(The Nymph of Spring and Flowers)
I thought this was very entertaining since I too love Greek Mythology and I thought you captured the essence of this myth beautifully. I would say that your use of ...
Apr 1, 2015 -
Re: Power of the Storm
This has been an entertaining read and I find that your use of metaphors is very descriptive and wonderfully delightful. I like how you used the storm as a metaphor ...
Apr 1, 2015 -
Re: The Song of the Mountain King
I very much enjoyed this poem since I am a fan of the Hobbit book and the movies. I found this to be a very entertaining read. This is pretty ...
Apr 1, 2015 -
Re: my past is a museum
I found this piece of work very nice and captivating. I enjoy the imagery for it gave me a very imaginative view on the way I interpret my own memories. ...
Apr 1, 2015 -
Re: A Faery Seduction
I just have to say that this poem was wonderfully written and i loved the story. You have a wonderful talent and as I read this I felt the emotion ...
Nov 5, 2013 -
Re: Tendencies
This poem is beautifully written and its message is conveyed beautifully. I loved how you described the pain of a first love. The way you describe the character's feelings and ...
Nov 5, 2013 -
Re: To Watch and Burn
This is an amazing poem and i loved the conflict between the demons and the hero. With this poem you can turn it into a really good novel and anything ...
Nov 5, 2013 -
Re: The Flight of the Phoenix
This is really great poem and i love how it is about my second favorite mythical bird the Phoenix. I can see how this can start a book series it ...
Nov 5, 2013 -
Re: Death Becomes Her
This is a suspenseful poem and a little dark but I like it none the less. This piece shows the fear of change and i just have to say I ...
Nov 4, 2013 -
Re: My Amateur FanFic - Misty Mountains
This is a great work of art and a great twist of the fandom. It is also great to see a fan of the Lord of the Rings and the ...
Nov 4, 2013 -
Re: Got You
That is a pretty good horror poem and I love how the end brings out that surprise. Love how the end came at you i have to know if she ...
Nov 4, 2013 -
Re: The Prophecy.
This was a great poem and i simply fell in love with this piece. My favorite line " A stranger in my friend's body makes no sound." i loved the ...
Oct 30, 2013 -
Re: I, The Witch
This poem was deep and i really like this work. My favorite line was "The witch will die, but her soul will last. She will be free! She will feel ...
Oct 28, 2013 -
Re: In the End
This is a really great poem and it is a art of vision. I love the lines "Your life written in stone, Far away from your home. The door now ...
Oct 25, 2013 -
Re: Alone
This poem was really good and a little spooky but still great. My favorite stanza was "I am gone, A black shadow, No more, Alone.". This really a good piece ...
Oct 25, 2013
