DannieInkblotHanson

Aaaaaaaaaah this was so good! Here! I wrote you some things! Good: Fantastic stage directions. Having an actual table and chair would also be a good idea because then she ...

This is beautiful and sad. Please don't think things like that, because the world still needs writers like you. Your rhyming was flawless. Gorgeous wording. It's difficult to make poems ...

I politely disagree with the friend who said this doesn't belong in the Script category, because it would actually make a pretty great monologue. It has a really interesting concept ...

You certainly have a knack for the writing of skits. Here, I did a thing for you. Good: Wonderfully doable for young actors, regarding age, subject matter, props and setting. ...

This was lovely, in every sense, first of all! Good job! Here are some things to think about. Good: Great plot. It was driving and interesting and overall very well-developed. ...

Hello! I'm Dannie. Here is a review for you. I really enjoyed this. The metaphor about the broken china relating to her and her beauty was quite well-thought out. But ...

This is so very sweet. The POV character was quite endearing even without a whole lot of development; his thoughts of her are enough to define him Here are some ...

I liked the writing style a lot. It created a strange and surreal little world that I really wanted to hear more about. I didn't catch the name of the ...

This ruined my day in the best sort of way. Actually it didn't but it did make me very sad. Beginning to read it I expected the protagonist to be ...

That made my heart happy. By making it sad. That was such a different take on a candle, I've heard several poems about them but few as thoughtful as this ...

This is actually a very accurate portrayal of how modern society ignores nature. You flow was excellent and new, but the last bit was a tad choppy. Nonetheless I could ...

Short and sweet and to the point. Having experience with disturbed kids, this was especially moving. Your wording was eloquent and beautiful in a dark sort of way. Even so ...