Daenyss

Hi! I love how you craft this idea of love and how it's conveyed from person to person with this poem. However, I do have a few critiques for you. ...

Hi! I love how there's a short, novel-like aspect to the beginning of this, and then how you have the poem on the image. Your grammar is great. Bravo to ...

Hi! I just wanted to pop by and give this a quick little read, and I thought I'd leave a few comments on this! First of all, I love how ...

Oof. I love how real this poem is, and how much it can resonate with everyone who's ever struggled with their confidence. My only critiques are on punctuation and capitalization, ...

Hi! I just want to say, this is a really cool poem. I love the idea that the narrator wants to be something that they're not, and the many interpretations ...

This makes me feel good, if I'm being honest. If I'm being honest, the grammar and punctuation were far from perfect, but in this poem, that's perfection in and of ...

This is gorgeous. Truly. The struggle of inner demons vs. what's socially acceptable is really beautiful. Onto the review: The last stanza loses me a bit. The prior stanzas are ...

I love how this addresses peer pressure and growing up! Maybe that wasn't the point of this poem, but that's what i took from it. Oh well. Onto the review: ...

This is a beautiful poem, and as I've said in past reviews, I love that it focuses on an emotion and on a single scene instead of an overarching plot ...

This is gorgeous, truly, and just the kind of poetry I like. I love how it's conveying emotion, and plot isn't as important. It focuses more on one moment, and ...

I love how this both conveys emotion and also has a plot, something truly special in poems these days. Most people seem to focus more on plot, but my favorite ...

Hi! I love how this is written so that it seems like a mother giving advice to a young daughter, like something I might see in an old movie, like ...

Gosh. This is beautiful. I love how the pain and how the attempt at resolving that pain is translated in the metaphor of a flower. However, the last stanza starting ...

Okay, this is honestly a beautiful poem! As a Christian myself, I love how true and solid this poem is. Now to the review part. As beautiful as this poem ...

I love how this is structured! The line breaks have the perfect effect on the reader to make them pause for just a second before moving on, which allows the ...