Radrook here for a review.
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If I offend my apologies. Not intended.
Thanks for sharing this poem in which a persona or perhaps the author expresses the desire to enjoy the lifestyle of a carnivorous wild beast. The poem expresses admiration for the predator/prey situation where the predator unmercifully dominates. The speaker desires to participate in the infliction of fear, the dominance of the weak, and the thrill of the chase and the kill of weaker creatures. The strong desire for that kind of existence is very effectively conveyed and I just couldn't help but wonder why.
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Please note that some readers might understand this as human lust for power and dominance over others and consider the personality traits undesirable. Not saying that this is necessarily the inevitable case, just saying that is the impression that some readers might get.
Suggestion
The meter is more or less acceptable until the following wolf part is introduced. I also had trouble accepting a wolf as the mightiest of beasts as opposed to a lion, tiger. grizzly bear, rhino, elephant, hippo, etcetera.
“That the wolves play....”
Thanks for sharing. Looking forward to reading more of your work.
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