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  • Poetry » General, General Re: Reminiscing~

    Hey Cynder here, hope you don't mind a review? I'm not sure what the tone is here. Reminiscing in itself is a powerful word, but it is not all-encompassing. Is ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Romantic, Realistic Re: For the Broken Hearted - A collection of Short Poems

    Cynder here. Poetry is defenitely not dead, and I love that you had that in your poem! Ehem, anyway, I love the title, and it works it certainly works well ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: Maybe I Won't

    Wow, so many people liked your work!! You must feel great! Good job. Cynder here, with a review. I can't really tell if it's laziness or something else, but I ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: do not put your heart on standby

    Hey Cynder here. First off, I love the emotion I can sense coming from the poem which is fantastic. Job well done. I do, however, have a few points of ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Lyrics » Realistic, General Re: Lorenna

    Wow, um Cynder here. I don't know if you spent a lot of time on this before you posted it, but whenever you did, or if it all happened to ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: My Dearest Friend

    So, Cynder here. Are you gonna hate me if I review this and criticize it? Because I know it's about your friend and it means a lot to you. But, ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The True Windows to the Soul

    Okay, @niteowl , You are still one of my favorite writers. Totally not favortism, so, shhh. Anyway, I loved stanza two because I can relate. My sister bites her nails ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Horror, Supernatural Re: Night of Ethereal Pain

    Cynder here. I'd love to review your poem, if you wouldn't mind too much XD Anyway, I love the overall theme of your poem. It is simple and elegant, and ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Love and Gravity

    Okay, wow, you only have two poems and both are pretty fantastic. So, congratulations on that. I love how soft this poem is, how sweet it is, with just a ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Literature Re: Never-Mentioned Enemy

    Cynder here. Hope you don't mind a review :) In line 3, I think you meant "was I" but if you put "were" for the way it sounds in your ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Poetry » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Pounding Hooves

    Hey, first of all, great poem. Like the reviewer below me, I also love horses. xD If I was going to point out some things, that is, if you don't ...

    Aug 28, 2016
  • Short Story » Romantic, Realistic Re: Crush

    AWWWWWW!! So adorable!! Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, you should make a story out of it. I loved how pure it is, and I think you did a very good ...

    Feb 11, 2016
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Regrets

    Hey Cynder here. I've done a lot of free verse poetry myself, and I've learned a few things. There's a difference between keeping it simple and not giving enough information ...

    Oct 25, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative Re: The Forgotten

    Hey Cynder here. Not that you'd like a review, but I have some thoughts, if you don't mind. This was pretty well written for a poem. Most authors mess up ...

    Aug 30, 2015
  • Poetry » Other, Lyrical Re: The Other Side

    Hey, myjaspercat, Cynder here. I wanted to review this, as I also write about topics similar to this one. I start off with praise, because I know I certainly couldn't ...

    Jul 22, 2015


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