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Re: Reminiscing~
Hey Cynder here, hope you don't mind a review? I'm not sure what the tone is here. Reminiscing in itself is a powerful word, but it is not all-encompassing. Is ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: For the Broken Hearted - A collection of Short Poems
Cynder here. Poetry is defenitely not dead, and I love that you had that in your poem! Ehem, anyway, I love the title, and it works it certainly works well ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Maybe I Won't
Wow, so many people liked your work!! You must feel great! Good job. Cynder here, with a review. I can't really tell if it's laziness or something else, but I ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: do not put your heart on standby
Hey Cynder here. First off, I love the emotion I can sense coming from the poem which is fantastic. Job well done. I do, however, have a few points of ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Lorenna
Wow, um Cynder here. I don't know if you spent a lot of time on this before you posted it, but whenever you did, or if it all happened to ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: My Dearest Friend
So, Cynder here. Are you gonna hate me if I review this and criticize it? Because I know it's about your friend and it means a lot to you. But, ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: The True Windows to the Soul
Okay, @niteowl , You are still one of my favorite writers. Totally not favortism, so, shhh. Anyway, I loved stanza two because I can relate. My sister bites her nails ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Night of Ethereal Pain
Cynder here. I'd love to review your poem, if you wouldn't mind too much XD Anyway, I love the overall theme of your poem. It is simple and elegant, and ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Love and Gravity
Okay, wow, you only have two poems and both are pretty fantastic. So, congratulations on that. I love how soft this poem is, how sweet it is, with just a ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Never-Mentioned Enemy
Cynder here. Hope you don't mind a review :) In line 3, I think you meant "was I" but if you put "were" for the way it sounds in your ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Pounding Hooves
Hey, first of all, great poem. Like the reviewer below me, I also love horses. xD If I was going to point out some things, that is, if you don't ...
Aug 28, 2016 -
Re: Crush
AWWWWWW!! So adorable!! Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, you should make a story out of it. I loved how pure it is, and I think you did a very good ...
Feb 11, 2016 -
Re: Regrets
Hey Cynder here. I've done a lot of free verse poetry myself, and I've learned a few things. There's a difference between keeping it simple and not giving enough information ...
Oct 25, 2015 -
Re: The Forgotten
Hey Cynder here. Not that you'd like a review, but I have some thoughts, if you don't mind. This was pretty well written for a poem. Most authors mess up ...
Aug 30, 2015 -
Re: The Other Side
Hey, myjaspercat, Cynder here. I wanted to review this, as I also write about topics similar to this one. I start off with praise, because I know I certainly couldn't ...
Jul 22, 2015
