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Re: Secret of the One-Chapter 4.2
Hi, Therese! :) I've been just reading for a few chapters, but I decided to do a review of this one. First off, I think the setting is pretty interesting, ...
Dec 4, 2014 -
Re: Wool of the Prince-- Chapter 4
:D This is awesome! I love this story so so so much! I'm planning on reading all of the chapters. But out of curiosity (it comes with the name), why ...
Dec 1, 2014 -
Re: Oh My Word
Hi, Holysocks, this is Curiosity (killed the) Cat here to review! First your title caught my interest. "Because I Can". It's all cool and mysterious. What kept my attention was ...
Nov 27, 2014 -
Re: Works of Fire
Hello, Cat here to review! :) First off, this idea is terrifying! Deadly gas disguised as fireworks? O.O Disturbing!! And the men who lit that poor boy on fire. I ...
Nov 18, 2014 -
Re: The Nightmare Man
Hello, Cat here. I love this story! It's brilliant. I really like the idea of the Nightmare Man. :D It's so interesting. I wonder who it is who could see ...
Jan 28, 2015 -
Re: Acceptance is Not a Lie: Counter Essay to "Christianity is a Lie"
I'm not even Christian, and yet the point you just made is so valid I can't NOT love it. :D You are a great writer. You were funny and serious ...
Nov 9, 2014 -
Re: Help Wanted
Hi! This is Cat, here to review, as I promised! :D First off: I totally LOVE the theme of this poem. Thanks for sticking up for those people who don't ...
Nov 6, 2014 -
Re: The Doctor's final speech.
I love this story so much! My favorite lines are "His coat felt empty without his screwdriver, and he felt empty without Donna."
Nov 3, 2014 -
Re: Darkness Surrenders My Soul
No offense intended, but even without the grammatical errors, this story needs some work. Part of it may be that I can't really understand who is talking. "Dude", "guy", and ...
Nov 2, 2014 -
Re: The Open Window
Wow! This is awesome! I was grinning through the entire thing. The suspense is great! First off, I love that the monster isn't just a predictable "creepy consciousness" or anything, ...
Nov 2, 2014 -
Re: To Love a Killer
Wow! This is awesome! I love the idea. The girl couldn't help but love a killer, and she paid the price for loving him. It gives you a glimpse into ...
Oct 20, 2014 -
Re: d
First thing: High-fives for the Heroes of Olympus and Harry Potter references! I loved the dolphin-pirate part, too. ("Help," Frank said, like he was reading from a teleprompter, "I am ...
Oct 6, 2014 -
Re: Why I believe in God.
Wow! This is cool! I think it's also very very VERY cool that you made this a haiku. Haikus are fun, but they're surprisingly fiddly beasts, and I love when ...
Oct 5, 2014 -
Re: When Two Hearts Collide
Hey, Cat here! I think this is a fantastic poem. I love the rhyme, and the way you tell the story so eloquently. There are a few things you could ...
Oct 1, 2014 -
Re: Death and Destruction.
Cat here. *wipes tears form eye* That... *blows nose loudly* That definitely qualifies as emotionally painful, Kelpies. (In a good way. :) ) OK, first thing: I totally LOVE this ...
Oct 1, 2014
