Cosmo

Hi there! Cosmo here for a review. Lets go from the first line. Which I am struggling to understand, I don't get where your tense is, the wordage is very....weird. ...

Cosmo here for my first review in what must seem like an age. So! Let me begin. As an overall poem, I like it! It has a story line, which ...

Hi there! I'll go through stanza by stanza. The very first line introduces the theme of the poem, which is good, there is a focus. The second line seems like ...

Hi there! My first impression: Violent. The overarching story highlights the troubles between your sister (not sure whether this is based on a true story or not so I'm just ...

Hi there! So I've skipped back a few pages to start my reviewing and this is the first one I picked out. The title is what caught my mind first, ...

Hi there! I'll go through bit by bit. The first quatrain was good, I liked it in the sense of the rhythm and drive it has to it, really good ...

Hi! Well this is... interesting. You've organized the poem into quatrains, with 2 rhyming couplets within them. Which is good basic structure to follow. The first quatrain I quite like, ...

Hi there! I'll go from the top. Your introduction was good, it gave exposition into his location, and it also set the obstacle in which the short would revolve around. ...

Hi there! I can't really decide what I think of this Poem. I can't decide whether the style you've used is effective or not. When I read the words in ...

Hey! Hhhmmm done in a Shakespearean form? interesting, the way you've finished it is how Shakespeare would finish an act in his plays with a rhyming couplet, to let the ...

Hi Ionut! This is my first review in a long while, so please excuse me if I'm a little vague. First paragraph: So good use of descriptive language here, although ...

Hi there! As an overall, I really like all the comparisons to snow, in most pieces I read there is only 1 or maybe 2 on the rare occasion that ...

To me this seems like quite a dark piece of writing, that brightens up towards the end. The start begins with a protagonist doubting his/her person, as to who they ...

To me this seems like quite a dark piece of writing, that brightens up towards the end. The start begins with a protagonist doubting his/her person, as to who they ...

An interesting piece here. I can see what your trying at, however there are somethings you may want to change or consider! I'll go through the lines or parts that ...