Corncob

Salutations! Let's get down to it! 1. I want to be alone tonight, so I can cry about my misery alone. Very dramatic opening line. I don't know whether to ...

Hello! Here to review your second edition of this building piece! 1. 10:24 pm So, I'm starting to think like Noelle (yay! XD) and that this indication that she writes ...

Ehem. The bae is here. *Clears throat.* Let's get started; sorry to keep you waiting for so long! 1. I'm writing to you because I'm a misfit. You just get ...

Heyyyyy bro!!!! I'm so glad you joined!! Mmk, so can't exactly review my own piece (that I collaborated with you) but I have a couple nitpicks to the way you ...

This was really amazing, Night. It had so much emotion, and the perfect irony is that it's about you unable to express your emotion through words. It was simply awesome. ...

Although this is obviously part of like a "logic" series, I think you could put on an artistic, thoughtful touch by adding something about how every time you talk, your ...

Getting right down to it: “Rather starve myself.” I reply with a head tilt and a smile. Her smile goes away, replaced with a ‘you immature rat’ look. Love this ...

Ok, first off, I really enjoyed this chapter, but I'm not sure you want it to be a constant thing. Perhaps only a few chapters from Ashley's point of view? ...

Hi, theironnovelist (absolutely LOVE your name :D, but do you have a nickname, though it is a shame to shorten such a genius name?). I'll try not to repeat what ...

I like this very much. However, I don't understand what happened/what didn't happen. How is the person dead? Did they kill themselves? Is this theoretical? Do you mind explaining? I ...

Getting right into it......(by the way, it's +1 here to review for a Mini Review Day) 1. “Shoot!” The exclamation punctuated the sound of pottery shattering. My neighbor, Shalaka had ...

Okay, so this was nice! :D It didn't rhyme, which is cool, because a lot of poems don't rhyme. However, I think this would have worked really well as a ...

Okay, I haven't read your other chapters, so I'm basically just going to nitpick this and speculate. My apologies! “Enter,” her mother called, focused on the cards. She didn’t look ...

I see why this got accepted. Granting that, there were a lot of typos in this, and misspelled words. I'm not going to list all of them. They were mostly ...

So, you asked for nitpicking, and I would usually squeal with delight and rip through this story but....I'm exhausted. So, I will do less nitpicking than usual. HOWEVER, YOU SHOULD ...