Corncob

I thought this was really good and I actually really enjoyed it. There was a lot of emotion and pain and confusion, and all these emotions and more were portrayed ...

Hi, +1 here for a super quick review. Limericks are very difficult to write, especially the last line. For me, that is definitely the hardest part. You did a pretty ...

Ok. Wow. So I don't know about others, but 1) I thought it was really brave of you to post this and 2) This is exactly how I feel. I ...

I felt like this was one of those poems that tried so hard to be to-the-point and this kind of funny that it just wasn't. Honestly, it was pretty cliche. ...

*VERY LOUD HAPPINESS EXPLOSION* Mmk. 1. He had injected me in the wrists, in the side, other places. Just a tiny flow thing; you don't need "in" before "the side." ...

Here to review as requested armed with only a few light suggestions (sorry, not in chronological order because I am a butt): 1. But no one experiences that much happiness. ...

Although this had no real rhythm or flow, that's what I liked most about it. I could immediately tell you wrote this " after being in a fit of rage." ...

Hello; here to review as promised! 1. it took me 35 seconds to slip into my gown. Just in the matter of flow, I suggest making "to slip into my ...

Very nice idea! @jazzydracula I definitely agree that this was an accurate way to describe death from a certain point of view. Only a few nitpicks: 1. Then my neck ...

Wow. 1. "I want you to stay because I love you, as I always will" You face me and we smile our eyes full of love Okay, so really, I'm ...

First of all, thanks for doing so many awesome reviews for us Review Ninjas! Behold, a fellow member of the Review Ninjas, here to karate chop apart this piece! I'm ...

Right into it! 1. the sky is erupting like fireworks, the bombs go off on the sides, the smoke rises, and an old woman cries. So, I was reading your ...

Hi, here to review as promised! So, the first things I noticed were: 1. Length and 2. Rhyme scheme I like short poems, I do, but I was a little ...

TIS MY HUNDREDTH REVIIIIIIIIEW!!!!!!!!!!!! *Ehem.* 1. A bit long but hope its worth reading Okay, so this might be good as an author's note, but right away you degrade your ...

Greetings, young writer! To the review, we go! 1. It's hard to be in the woods, which confuses my mother and father, for it used to be my favorite place. ...