ConverseFireGirl

Well damn. What an awesome piece of poetry. I envy your talent! This is a fabulous poem though, I love your wording in certain places! "Show me the white hot ...

Hello! A review for you! :D Thought this was a really good piece of poetry. But, check your plurals and singulars. The plural and singulars where things like: "dreams grows" ...

Wow. Wow. Wow. This is AMAZING. I love it, I love it! Your rhythm, for me, is just fine, I really like how you've made this rhyme successfully, I always ...

Hey, I'm awfully sorry if this review isn't helpful, as I'm not amazing at reviewing poetry, but I'll try! So, I love your rhyming in this, it's really well done ...

Wow. This is so good, it really intrigues the reader! I love: "I saw stars, I saw sparks, I saw withering hearts," It rhymes too, which adds more to it ...

This is an awesome poem, seriously. I really like how you're made this flow, with the rhymes you've used. The last line is really powerful, and really rounds off the ...

Hello! A review! :D Firstly, this is an awesome short poem, so if my review isn't great, it's mainly because: A.) I'm not great at reviewing poetry B.) It's short ...

A review! :D This is an awesome poem. I seriously don't know how people write poetry as good as this! Firstly, I love the way you repeat the "All I ...

This is a really good poem! I like the wording you have used, like how Spearhawkdude said, the last line is great. It's very powerful, summing up the poem and ...

Wow. Seriously wow. This could be a book or something! This is a really good piece of writing, you really sympathize with Silvernist and despise her "friends" Stella and Emma ...

Wow, this is amazing! I'm new here, so I hope this review will live up to expectations! Firstly, I love the way you have portrayed each character, and written about ...

Wow, I just read Chapter One and Two and OH MY LORD, AMAZING. This is seriously really good though, I haven't read much about bulimia before, and this has really ...

This is a really great poem here, it's very powerful, by the way that you repeat the "You are stronger than that" And having at the end really emphasised your ...

*jaw drops* AMAZING. Oh my Lord. This is amazing. I just love it! I really like how you repeat: "We were young. We were brave." Using the full stops as ...

Wow, this is great! I just love the lines: "A wrong step is all it takes to conquer the eyes of the tigers" It fits really well with the poem, ...