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Clairia

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  • Poetry » General, General Re: when we were there

    Hi, there! I'm @Daughter, here to review your work. This is a beautiful piece. I can tell you've truly put soul into it, which is so important to do when ...

    Sep 19, 2019
  • Poetry » Lyrical, Literature Re: Presently Absent

    Hey, @Kaceymackwriter! I'm Daughter, here to leave you a review. Let's jump right in! I loved, loved, LOVED your rhyme scheme throughout this piece. It flowed so well overall and ...

    Sep 17, 2019
  • Poetry » General, General Re: evolve

    Hi, there! I'm Daughter, here to leave you a review! Happy #RevMo ! I'm going to keep this short and sweet, just like your piece :) I really enjoyed this. ...

    Sep 16, 2019
  • Short Story » Teen Fiction, Spiritual Re: A memorable day

    Hi, @UsualBoi ! I'm @Daughter, here to leave you a review! Let's go ahead and jump right in! I'm going to keep my criticisms short and sweet, because I really ...

    Sep 16, 2019
  • Short Story » Narrative, Realistic Re: Miki

    Hi, there! I'm @Daughter, and I'm here to leave you a quick review! Let's go ahead and jump right in. Miki shook her head, shaking the water off and spraying ...

    Sep 16, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Other Re: Until my love runs out

    Hello, there!! I'm @Daughter, but you can call me Arden! I've come to leave you a review. Let's go ahead and jump right in! (Pst! I tend not to cover ...

    Sep 16, 2019
  • Short Story » Humor, Realistic Re: "Help! My Heads Stuck in the Clouds!"

    Hi there! I'm Daughter, here to leave you a review! Let's jump right into it! Mrs. Q loved her job. Anyone could see that teaching was her passion, and she ...

    Jul 16, 2019
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Sxve yOURself

    Hi, there! I'm Daughter, here to leave you a review! Let's get right into it! (Note: My criticisms are only meant to be constructive. I hope you find some sort ...

    Jul 16, 2019
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: my last goodbye (redone)

    Hello, there! I'm here to leave you a review! This piece was touching and extremely descriptive. It flowed quite nicely with excessive detail and was pleasing to the eye. It ...

    Jul 6, 2019
  • Poetry » Romantic, Literature Re: Honey and Sunshine

    Hello, there! Elisabet here (as requested) to review! Let's go ahead and jump right in! Does this thought ever cross your mind That you’re not totally straight But contain in ...

    Dec 21, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, Other Re: The Brightest Star

    Hello, there! I'm Elisabet, here to review your work! I've always been intrigued by stars and the idea that our Universe is far more grand and fantastic than we could ...

    Dec 2, 2018
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Literature Re: Paraanoia

    Hi there! I'm Arden, here to review your work! Let's go ahead and jump right into it. First of all, welcome to YWS! We're so glad to have you on ...

    Nov 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: 3818919

    Hello, there! Arden here to drop you a quick review. I really took a fondness to this piece. The flow is flawless and I found it to be a very ...

    Nov 6, 2018
  • Poetry » Other, Realistic Re: Rotten Touch

    Hey there! Arden here to review your work. My interpretation of this poem was rather dark, which I believe you intended, and it was executed well in that sense. The ...

    Nov 6, 2018
  • Novel / Chapter » Narrative, Narrative Re: Shine-Chapter 2!

    Hi there, Sophie!! I really liked reading/reviewing your first chapter of Shine, so I'm here to leave ya another review for Chapter Two! (I'm gonna be trying to keep up ...

    Nov 6, 2018


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