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Re: when we were there
Hi, there! I'm @Daughter, here to review your work. This is a beautiful piece. I can tell you've truly put soul into it, which is so important to do when ...
Sep 19, 2019 -
Re: Presently Absent
Hey, @Kaceymackwriter! I'm Daughter, here to leave you a review. Let's jump right in! I loved, loved, LOVED your rhyme scheme throughout this piece. It flowed so well overall and ...
Sep 17, 2019 -
Re: evolve
Hi, there! I'm Daughter, here to leave you a review! Happy #RevMo ! I'm going to keep this short and sweet, just like your piece :) I really enjoyed this. ...
Sep 16, 2019 -
Re: A memorable day
Hi, @UsualBoi ! I'm @Daughter, here to leave you a review! Let's go ahead and jump right in! I'm going to keep my criticisms short and sweet, because I really ...
Sep 16, 2019 -
Re: Miki
Hi, there! I'm @Daughter, and I'm here to leave you a quick review! Let's go ahead and jump right in. Miki shook her head, shaking the water off and spraying ...
Sep 16, 2019 -
Re: Until my love runs out
Hello, there!! I'm @Daughter, but you can call me Arden! I've come to leave you a review. Let's go ahead and jump right in! (Pst! I tend not to cover ...
Sep 16, 2019 -
Re: "Help! My Heads Stuck in the Clouds!"
Hi there! I'm Daughter, here to leave you a review! Let's jump right into it! Mrs. Q loved her job. Anyone could see that teaching was her passion, and she ...
Jul 16, 2019 -
Re: Sxve yOURself
Hi, there! I'm Daughter, here to leave you a review! Let's get right into it! (Note: My criticisms are only meant to be constructive. I hope you find some sort ...
Jul 16, 2019 -
Re: my last goodbye (redone)
Hello, there! I'm here to leave you a review! This piece was touching and extremely descriptive. It flowed quite nicely with excessive detail and was pleasing to the eye. It ...
Jul 6, 2019 -
Re: Honey and Sunshine
Hello, there! Elisabet here (as requested) to review! Let's go ahead and jump right in! Does this thought ever cross your mind That you’re not totally straight But contain in ...
Dec 21, 2018 -
Re: The Brightest Star
Hello, there! I'm Elisabet, here to review your work! I've always been intrigued by stars and the idea that our Universe is far more grand and fantastic than we could ...
Dec 2, 2018 -
Re: Paraanoia
Hi there! I'm Arden, here to review your work! Let's go ahead and jump right into it. First of all, welcome to YWS! We're so glad to have you on ...
Nov 6, 2018 -
Re: 3818919
Hello, there! Arden here to drop you a quick review. I really took a fondness to this piece. The flow is flawless and I found it to be a very ...
Nov 6, 2018 -
Re: Rotten Touch
Hey there! Arden here to review your work. My interpretation of this poem was rather dark, which I believe you intended, and it was executed well in that sense. The ...
Nov 6, 2018 -
Re: Shine-Chapter 2!
Hi there, Sophie!! I really liked reading/reviewing your first chapter of Shine, so I'm here to leave ya another review for Chapter Two! (I'm gonna be trying to keep up ...
Nov 6, 2018
