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Re: The Diary of the Sluttiest Virgin
The title is genius :D It's very intriguing. I love the flow of words, its very original. The characters have cool names as well. I can't wait to read more ...
Aug 17, 2013 -
Re: It's her.
OMG OMG OMG :O this is brilliant :( I miss feeling like this about someone. This reminds me of those poems in Chicken Soup for the Teenage soul. Idk why ...
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: Fantasies and Daydreams Never End Like Fairy Tales and Lullabys
This could be a song I think. Its so bittersweet :) I get it. I love this point of view, a guy's point of view on this subject. You write ...
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: Sad Spring
This is so short yet so powerful. It really struck a note in my heart :') I know what this poem means. The part tht literally made me tear up ...
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: A Beautiful Mess
I love this :) I can so relate to it :) my favorite part is You called yesterday, But it wasn't enough. You said you wanted me there, You wish ...
Aug 16, 2013 -
Re: Forgotten Ripples Turn to Glass
I adore the feel of this piece :) its really well written. It captured my attention :D my favorite part was the ending "You are here, but you are silent; ...
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: Live It Up <3 <3
I really enjoyed reading this :D the only thing that I would have to say is you didn't capitalize a couple things. Its awesome anyways :) this is my favorite ...
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: me without you
I love this song :O like if this was a single at a store I would totally buy this :D my favorite part is what I think is the chorus ...
Jul 19, 2013 -
Re: Wish
I've read dozens of poems but none of them ever made me cry. I balled when I read this. You are such a brave person Ayden :) I love your ...
May 25, 2013 -
Re: A Cowardly Pandora
This is so interesting!! The description in the description box drew me in and the title is so intriguing. I love the idea of it and way you wrote it. ...
May 25, 2013 -
Re: A Cowardly Pandora
This is so interesting!! The description in the description box drew me in and the title is so intriguing. I love the idea of it and way you wrote it. ...
May 25, 2013 -
Re: Like Wine
I really like the theme of this poem. It almost made me thirsty :P I love how you describe it and the way you rhyme is brilliant. " But when ...
May 21, 2013 -
Re: The Girl with the Heart Shaped Glasses
I absolutely love this story. I love the girl's character, its really well written. "He would watch her, as she walked into the school, her high heels clicking against the ...
May 18, 2013 -
Re: Rocker
This is a beautiful song : ) the chorus ''And I hope you are listening to me now Baby there is no one like you, there is no one like ...
May 18, 2013 -
Re: The Progression of Madness
I love how you write! Omg its so cool. I love how you weave the words together to form something that is so interesting. The title really intrigued me so ...
May 18, 2013
