CinnaThePoet

Hi there! I've decided to follow your novel. I'm going to write things down as I read and then write an overall impression at the end. -"I had a cut ...

Hi :) I'm not sure I understood this poem entirely, either. I don't know if I'm just not putting some things together or you wrote it intentionally to be something ...

Hello :) Let me start by saying that I really enjoyed this read. It was very balanced, in the sense that it was very real but very poetic without being ...

Hi there! I'm not sure exactly how I feel about this poem. I like the rhyme scheme in stanza three and I like it a little less in stanzas one ...

Hello :) I really loved your thought process while writing this, because it sounds really natural and realistic. However, I think that you can make this a lot more poetic ...

Hello :) I often find that reading chapters of novels on this website can be very boring, but I think that yours is a novel that I would like to ...

Hello :) This poem is quite refreshing. It was one of those moments when you read and your smile widens as you read and by the end of the poem ...

Hi again! I've read quite a few pieces here which allude to the darker aspects of the human mind, and my biggest source of confusion is usually not being able ...

Hello :) I really enjoyed this. This is the the most eloquent literary response to the "2012" hysteria I've come across: It has a lot of class, a tinge of ...

Hello :) Let me first say that this took me several reads to really understand what you were trying to tell your readers. There were a few really confusing segments ...

Hello :) There was a lot to like about this poem. You not only mentioned your emotions but you expanded on them by drawing a connection between what you feel ...

Hello :) Well first I would like to apologize for the two blanks that I accidentally submitted here, because I hit the submit button early. But as for my review, ...

Hello! I think that the people who have reviewed this before I did really hit on some of the major grammatical stuff: You use way too many commas in many ...

This poem is absolutely wonderful. It is truly wonderful in every way. First things first, I'm a fan of your structure. It keeps the reader moving at a quick pace, ...

Hello! I read this over a few times, and I have a few conceptual criticisms as well as technical ones. My biggest difficulty with this story was that the direction ...