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Okay, first, I'd just like to say, that you have a good poem here. But, there are some things that should be corrected. "it's not a drama it's just... when ...

Heyy! I thought I'd stop by and give you an Holiday Review! I think that all of the depth, and the thought put into your work goes really well together. ...

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My most favorite part would have to be: "But gently do seek the words that you think. For actions may speak but words can sting." I think you did an ...

(Oops! My first one messed up..sorry!) My most favorite part was: "My emotions gone I have not felt since childhood Joy or pain or need I can only hurt And ...

My favorite part: "You could've told me everything was going to fall apart, instead of saying it was going to be okay. (. . .) And you want to know ...

I'm going to have to say that my most favorite part was, "Fires wouldn't die away- Ashes wouldn't hiss nor play Beneath the moon In that alleyway Over there. Right? ...

My favorite is this, "Perhaps it's a tired hand scrawling black ink on a page, or stories I've kept to myself, hiding my words, and keeping them safe. Or maybe ...

I have absolutely no criticism. I believe that your poem is perfect, in every single way. A lot of people can relate, I know I can. And the way you ...

Hi, Arif! I think that you wrote a really, really good poem. I love how much depth and thought you put into it, mostly. It's very much thought through, with ...

This. I like this. It's short, yes. But it's energetic, and it tells you exactly what it's story is behind it. You wrote this, yes? Well, kudos to you, then. ...

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I actually think that this short story, is perfect. There are imperfections, as the other viewers said, but to me, those imperfections are what make this so perfect. It doesn't ...

Okay, first, I'd like to point out that this is absolutely perfect. No criticism needed at all. I find nothing wrong with this. It tells so much, in so little ...

I think that you have a lot of writing skills, and you're using them just right. You don't need to change a thing. Your poem has just the right amount ...