Sting

This was a very impressive poem. The language was extremely eloquent. Your word flow was perfect. The last stanza was especially powerful amazing job.

Amazing poem. I love your writing style, keep the poems coming!

Hey There.
This was a very very impressive and potent poem. The use of short sentences keeps the reader interested, compelling as it is. Very well written.
Harshita

Powerful!

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My most favorite part would have to be:

"But gently do seek
the words that you think.
For actions may speak
but words can sting."

I think you did an absolutely beautiful job on picking the words.
They all work wonderful together.

There's nothing in the way of letting the poem flow together.

I believe that you have a lot of potential, and you're using it in the exact way that you're supposed to be.

Your talent is great.

I love your work.

I didn't find anything out of place.

You did a really, really good job in creating this lovely piece.

Keep up the good work!

Timmyjake to leave you a short review!

I know that with poetry its kind of just how you want with punctuation, but it seems to me as though with the first line, that something isn't right. I don't know. Maybe just how it is worded. Bullets Spray, unabashed. Maybe its the word? Unabashed? I don't know.
When I read this, I don't think of an actual gun, but a mouth. Someone hurting you with words. An excellent metaphor, although with a gun it is the person doing the hurting not the gun. Still an awesome example!
I loved this poem. It really says something. Don't hurt me. Words can sting. I loved it!
Keep Writing!!
~Timmyjake
Sorry its so short, but I've never been good at reviewing poetry!

Hello there!

This is a lovely poem you've written. I like how you compare words to the shot of a gun. Very unique.
I can feel such passion and almost bitter pain in this stanza here:

Spare me not
even one honest word.
Take your shot;
you will be heard.