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I like this. I really like this, actually. but some of the errors are bugging me. In the first stanza, you had: "But you cut my palms and blood ran ...

Even though none of this is a true story, it brought tears to my eyes. The though of even losing one of my sisters is enough to make me break ...

Job well done, lad! I really liked the concept of this, just because of how grimy it was. I have to say, I'm a fan of gore. There's not really ...

I love this. It's cute. And it flows quite well. I don't think there's anything here that needs nitpicking, so I'll just compliment you. "...the bullet that killed him ain't ...

I like this, I really do. But something that I didn't really understand was the 'we' in "It instantly flames with pain, but we start to like it". Who starts ...

I like this because it really just speaks to me on a different level. I just absolutely love how honest it is. I honestly don't even have anything to nitpick ...

I'M HERE TO REVIEW! First off, I have to say that I really liked this. Your concept was perfect. Your point was as clear as a crystal. I don't exactly ...

Goodness. This hit home. There's absolutely nothing for me to nitpick at. This poem is so relatable, it's scary. All of it. I read this about four times, tears pricking ...

Okay, can I just tell you how much I LOVE this? I absolutely don't have anything to nitpick at. I love the way you interpreted the Lord into this. My ...

I'm going to attempt to find something to nitpick at, but I don't think I'll be very successful, because this is really...beautiful. Yeah, I can't find anything. I'll just compliment ...

I really like this poem, I do. It's good. But, it seems that you kind of forced the rhyming parts out. I may be wrong, but that's what it seems ...

I have to say, that this is one of the best poems I've ever read. It's so...well thought. I can tell that you but a lot of thinking into your ...

I think you did a splendid job with this! Your work with the piece was just magnificent. The title is what reeled me in! I don't have anything at all ...

This was just...absolutely beautiful. Magnificent. I think my most favorite part would have to be: "The wings are ragged, worn with care Crafted out of magazines and newspaper They are ...