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  • Poetry » Other, General Re: What's wrong with me?

    Yo, Guy here to take you to Flavortown I don't have too many (nitpicks?) There's a couple of things that kind of just stuck out to me-- you know, that ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: Warm Tears

    Hi. So, this is a great poem. I didn't have very many problems with it, and the things that did stick out to me were minor issues. 1. Tears are ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Lyrical Re: A Day at School

    Hi, I really like this poem, but there's so many commas, that I can't even find, where things, are supposed, to end, so if you could, please, fix that, it ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: woman in chains

    Hey! GuyFieri here to take you, my friend, to Flavortown! So, this poem is good. It really is. But, there's some errors that need to be...fixed? Yeah. 1. although I ...

    Oct 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Lyrical Re: This World

    Hi! Shine here to review your amazing piece of literature. I thoroughly enjoyed how, even though you speak of the world coming to an end, the love for this person ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Other Re: The Man and The Mountain

    Hi! Shine here to review your awesome piece of literature. Firstly, I really enjoyed this poem. It was very clear as to what your whole point was, and I find ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Saviors of Nature

    Hi! Shine here to review your awesome literature. So, first things first, you better of gotten an amazing grade on this, otherwise I'll be having a talk with your teacher. ...

    Jun 28, 2015
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Heart of Glass

    I must say, you did splendid on this. Your concept, the way you made the words flow, just EVERYTHING about this is great. Excellent, actually. From what I can tell, ...

    May 8, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: still (s)he lies

    This is so...I don't even know. I'm at a loss of words. You did so well interpreting your theme, your point, I just love it so much. A pang of ...

    May 7, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The Rest of My Days

    Hey, Chris! I really loved the concept of this, and I adore how you didn't get off track. You kept the rhythm going, you had the correct amount of lines ...

    Mar 26, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Health Re: Another Truth: Friendship

    I honestly loved this. The wording seemed just right, and I thought it was so touching because this is friendship bound in several stanzas. You seemingly summed up friendship in ...

    Mar 6, 2015
  • Other » Realistic, Culture Re: End the "R-Word!"

    Though I agree with 'Retard' being a problem, I also disagree. In present day, you don't get a lot of complaints about people having a problem with the word. That's ...

    Dec 4, 2014
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: zayn's vampire girlfriend

    I don't want you to listen to the negative feedback some people are giving. Don't think you can't write, and don't stop writing/posting because somebody said you shouldn't. You're a ...

    Dec 3, 2014
  • Poetry » Romantic, Narrative Re: So...

    I absolutely love this. I imagined it as a boy messaging a girl, asking if she likes him, then panicking after she doesn't reply quickly enough, and adding 'as friends'. ...

    Nov 25, 2014
  • Other » General, Other Re: When The Wind Blows

    I really like these types of works. Like, from an inanimate objects perspective. It's inspiring. I like to see things from a different point of view, and with people making ...

    Nov 18, 2014


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