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Re: What's wrong with me?
Yo, Guy here to take you to Flavortown I don't have too many (nitpicks?) There's a couple of things that kind of just stuck out to me-- you know, that ...
Oct 26, 2015 -
Re: Warm Tears
Hi. So, this is a great poem. I didn't have very many problems with it, and the things that did stick out to me were minor issues. 1. Tears are ...
Oct 26, 2015 -
Re: A Day at School
Hi, I really like this poem, but there's so many commas, that I can't even find, where things, are supposed, to end, so if you could, please, fix that, it ...
Oct 26, 2015 -
Re: woman in chains
Hey! GuyFieri here to take you, my friend, to Flavortown! So, this poem is good. It really is. But, there's some errors that need to be...fixed? Yeah. 1. although I ...
Oct 26, 2015 -
Re: This World
Hi! Shine here to review your amazing piece of literature. I thoroughly enjoyed how, even though you speak of the world coming to an end, the love for this person ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: The Man and The Mountain
Hi! Shine here to review your awesome piece of literature. Firstly, I really enjoyed this poem. It was very clear as to what your whole point was, and I find ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Saviors of Nature
Hi! Shine here to review your awesome literature. So, first things first, you better of gotten an amazing grade on this, otherwise I'll be having a talk with your teacher. ...
Jun 28, 2015 -
Re: Heart of Glass
I must say, you did splendid on this. Your concept, the way you made the words flow, just EVERYTHING about this is great. Excellent, actually. From what I can tell, ...
May 8, 2015 -
Re: still (s)he lies
This is so...I don't even know. I'm at a loss of words. You did so well interpreting your theme, your point, I just love it so much. A pang of ...
May 7, 2015 -
Re: The Rest of My Days
Hey, Chris! I really loved the concept of this, and I adore how you didn't get off track. You kept the rhythm going, you had the correct amount of lines ...
Mar 26, 2015 -
Re: Another Truth: Friendship
I honestly loved this. The wording seemed just right, and I thought it was so touching because this is friendship bound in several stanzas. You seemingly summed up friendship in ...
Mar 6, 2015 -
Re: End the "R-Word!"
Though I agree with 'Retard' being a problem, I also disagree. In present day, you don't get a lot of complaints about people having a problem with the word. That's ...
Dec 4, 2014 -
Re: zayn's vampire girlfriend
I don't want you to listen to the negative feedback some people are giving. Don't think you can't write, and don't stop writing/posting because somebody said you shouldn't. You're a ...
Dec 3, 2014 -
Re: So...
I absolutely love this. I imagined it as a boy messaging a girl, asking if she likes him, then panicking after she doesn't reply quickly enough, and adding 'as friends'. ...
Nov 25, 2014 -
Re: When The Wind Blows
I really like these types of works. Like, from an inanimate objects perspective. It's inspiring. I like to see things from a different point of view, and with people making ...
Nov 18, 2014
