Chuck10931

Hey, I'm Chuck10931! And i'm gonna review!! So the start was awesome, but the tenses seem to switch here: He tackles Sophia, forcing him into her. "Please," she said in ...

Hey, it's Chuck10931 the person that hates all staff. (Well strongly dislikes anyway) I like this, it's not quite nine data bits. (Computer reference there.) You are referring to September ...

Hai! I'm Chuck. I like this story. It's quite nice. Although. You could do with a lot of work with your punctuation. For example: [quote"Was RUN ! Run for your ...

Okay! I am Chuck and I'll be doing your review today. Let's start off with punctuation. You need full stops. Also. Every sentence doesn't need a capital letter but then ...

I like this. It's a very interesting poem. I can't say I've ever come across something quite like it. I like the way it's portraying someone saving someone else from ...

Hai There! I'm Chuck and i'll be doing this weird concept of a review for you! "c'mon josh you know you cant spar because of your condition" This part needs ...

This is amazing. I loved it. It's very unique and something that I wouldn't normally read but it drew to me and I loved every word of it. There are ...

Okay! Hello there! I am Chuck and I will be doing a review for you! (The first review in a few months.) Now for starters I'm not gonna lie. I ...

Right. Hello. I am Chuck and I will be doing a review for you today! I loved your story. It was full of excitement but there were somethings that I ...

Hello. I am Chuck. Wait! You know that or do you? Anyway. I loved this story and i'd love to read more. (even though it's a short story) It pulled ...

Hello I am Chuck! Okay for starters something I noticed straight away is that your poem lacks punctuation. In the third stanza wouldn't Supposed make more sense? Also in the ...

Hello! I am Chuck. I will be doing a review for you today. Okay first off I noticed right up near the start that you have people talking on the ...

Hello. I am Chuck and I will being doing this review. Okay what struck me first is this paragraph here: There's always this hope that lingers in you like a ...

Hello I am Chuck!! I will be doing a review today. First of all I loved that book and can't wait to read more. I noticed in a few places ...

Well to start off with I am Chuck. You can call me Dan for the period of this review. These lyrics is amazing I loved the detail and the thought ...