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Re: Gold
Hello there! Late welcome to YWS! I'm Chris and I'm here to express my opinion about this poem. The first thing I noticed is that it's pretty long at length. ...
Jul 6, 2021 -
Re: Broken
Hello BrokenHeartsAri! I'm here to review the second poem you request. I'm sorry for the late review, I was going to review your poem but the next minute internet was ...
Jun 11, 2021 -
Re: I'm coming home
Hello there! I'm sorry I couldn't review this any sooner. I've been busy ever since I volunteered to be a judge in April Madness, the poem contest. I am here ...
Apr 19, 2021 -
Re: Cortez Shivick(Chapter 10)
Hi! I'm back again. As requested I am here, although a little late because of homework that seems to never stop pilling. Anyway, I'd like reading the story and would ...
Mar 31, 2021 -
Re: Exodus-Part One
Hi @HJYoung! I'm here for a review as requested. I enjoyed reading your writing and I'd like to tell you that you did a good job of making the dialogues ...
Mar 22, 2021 -
Re: The Ghost of Time
Hello @Pokeberry111! I can really relate to this poem, I love how it expresses the feelings I feel. I don't about you but I used to be sad a lot ...
Mar 18, 2021 -
Re: Love
Hola! Here for a review. As requested, I am here to nitpick on your poem and express my opinion. First of all, I want to say that I enjoyed the ...
Mar 10, 2021 -
Re: Because I love fun staffs
Hi! I'm a little late on the request, sorry about that. I like how this is short and simple and how it explains the struggles writers might have. I thought ...
Mar 10, 2021 -
Re: Sky of Seasons Chapter-1.2
Hello there! I'm so sorry about the late review, I wasn't on YWS as much last few weeks. I haven't read the first chapter but I think it's pretty good. ...
Mar 8, 2021 -
Re: ch 2: A sudden shock
Hi, here for review as requested! First of all, I want to wish you a wonderful day! And I want to tell you that this story as the one before ...
Feb 13, 2021 -
Re: The most disobedient
Hello there! I'm here for a review as requested. I'm having a busy week and I didn't have much time to go on YWS, I apologize for the late review. ...
Feb 13, 2021 -
Re: cursive
Hello there! I'm here for a short review. And to tell you that I enjoy reading this poem and I love the way you wrote it out. I enjoyed reading ...
Feb 1, 2021 -
Re: The High Families - The Kingdom of Ingrid Special Chapter
Hi! I'm here as requested. But just before that I want to say that I truly enjoyed reading this story and I think Dru and Agnes are both very interesting ...
Jan 31, 2021 -
Re: Entropy - Chapter One
Hello there! I'm here as requested. But just before that, I just want to say that I enjoyed reading this story and I was very intrigued by both the title ...
Jan 26, 2021 -
Re: Cabalistic Corporations | Chapter 1 | v2
Hello there! I'm here for a review as request. I'm just going to suggest a few things on spacing and grammar. First of all, I enjoyed reading this and I ...
Jan 6, 2021