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  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Gold

    Hello there! Late welcome to YWS! I'm Chris and I'm here to express my opinion about this poem. The first thing I noticed is that it's pretty long at length. ...

    Jul 6, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Broken

    Hello BrokenHeartsAri! I'm here to review the second poem you request. I'm sorry for the late review, I was going to review your poem but the next minute internet was ...

    Jun 11, 2021
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Teen Fiction Re: I'm coming home

    Hello there! I'm sorry I couldn't review this any sooner. I've been busy ever since I volunteered to be a judge in April Madness, the poem contest. I am here ...

    Apr 19, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Romantic Re: Cortez Shivick(Chapter 10)

    Hi! I'm back again. As requested I am here, although a little late because of homework that seems to never stop pilling. Anyway, I'd like reading the story and would ...

    Mar 31, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Other Re: Exodus-Part One

    Hi @HJYoung! I'm here for a review as requested. I enjoyed reading your writing and I'd like to tell you that you did a good job of making the dialogues ...

    Mar 22, 2021
  • Poetry » Teen Fiction, Health Re: The Ghost of Time

    Hello @Pokeberry111! I can really relate to this poem, I love how it expresses the feelings I feel. I don't about you but I used to be sad a lot ...

    Mar 18, 2021
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Love

    Hola! Here for a review. As requested, I am here to nitpick on your poem and express my opinion. First of all, I want to say that I enjoyed the ...

    Mar 10, 2021
  • Other » Humor, General Re: Because I love fun staffs

    Hi! I'm a little late on the request, sorry about that. I like how this is short and simple and how it explains the struggles writers might have. I thought ...

    Mar 10, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Mystery / Suspense Re: Sky of Seasons Chapter-1.2

    Hello there! I'm so sorry about the late review, I wasn't on YWS as much last few weeks. I haven't read the first chapter but I think it's pretty good. ...

    Mar 8, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, General Re: ch 2: A sudden shock

    Hi, here for review as requested! First of all, I want to wish you a wonderful day! And I want to tell you that this story as the one before ...

    Feb 13, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Literature, Action / Adventure Re: The most disobedient

    Hello there! I'm here for a review as requested. I'm having a busy week and I didn't have much time to go on YWS, I apologize for the late review. ...

    Feb 13, 2021
  • Poetry » General, General Re: cursive

    Hello there! I'm here for a short review. And to tell you that I enjoy reading this poem and I love the way you wrote it out. I enjoyed reading ...

    Feb 1, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: The High Families - The Kingdom of Ingrid Special Chapter

    Hi! I'm here as requested. But just before that I want to say that I truly enjoyed reading this story and I think Dru and Agnes are both very interesting ...

    Jan 31, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Entropy - Chapter One

    Hello there! I'm here as requested. But just before that, I just want to say that I enjoyed reading this story and I was very intrigued by both the title ...

    Jan 26, 2021
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, General Re: Cabalistic Corporations | Chapter 1 | v2

    Hello there! I'm here for a review as request. I'm just going to suggest a few things on spacing and grammar. First of all, I enjoyed reading this and I ...

    Jan 6, 2021


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