ChocolateCello

Hello! ChocolateCello here! There's nothing wrong I could find with this poem but I would like to point out your tenses. "I thought she was my friend. But instead, she ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! I'm sorry to say I've only gotten the chance to read about halfway through chapter five but I might not have the time to review later (Though ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Happy Review day! I'm running a bit low on sleep so I'm going to keep this quick. I would like to say that I loved the (very ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here for a review! (Happy Review Day!) First off, I would like to let you know I haven't written any reviews recently and I just got back from ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here to review! (Grammar only, not reviewing content) First off Welcome to YWS! (I already said that but it's always nice to welcome people) So, the capitalization in ...

Okay! So now that I have time I can give some actual feed back! So I'm looking over and there are a few minor things (Some actually mistakes, some opinions) ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Welcome to YWS! So I'm a little low on time so I'm going to keep it short and sweet. "Trying to capture the biggest, But only the ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Welcome yo YWS! First off, I truly love the content of this writing, so this will be purely grammatical. So, here it goes. First, you need to ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! First off, welcome to YWS! This work was great but I have a few minor things to point out. In the second part you say "Following them ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! First off, welcome to YWS! So, I usually review things like poems and editing short story's really isn't my strong suit but I have a two things ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! (well, it kind of says that in the corner but...) So first off, I really love the extra detail you added to his first flight. It captured ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! So, almost all the gammer mistakes I noticed were pointed out in the previous review. I still have a few things that were left out though. First ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Welcome to YWS! All of your poems were great and I hope you do some more writing soon, (Even though you just posted this). I have a ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! You did an amazing job at bringing these attacks to light, showing what happens and why. Although I think that these acid attacks are horrid, this poem ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! I haven't had a chance to read the other reviews so forgive me if I'm repeating comments. First of, I personally loved how philosophical the who thing ...