ChocolateCello

Hey! Cello here! I'm here to save you from the green room! (Happy review day!) So, I've been keeping up with this story (I really hope you write some more ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! (Happy review day) Okay, so I'm not the best as writing reviews that praise, I'm better with editing, but I'll give it a go. I really loved ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! (Haven't had a chance to skim the previous reviews so sorry if I'm repeating myself) So, you're asking for advice on a plot you haven't given. You've ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Happy review day! I really liked this, it was a good story and (Even though I read it as a poem oppose to a song) the flow ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! I'm not the best with review 'flow' so I'm just going to state the things I feel necessary. And I pull as hard as a man pulling ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here, saving you from the green room! (Happy review day!) Okay, so it's been roughly a month since you've posted this and I rarely review works over a ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Here to save you from the green room! (Happy review day) Really great poem. Everything was described really nicely and I think it all flowed nicely. Just ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here with the promised review! (Happy review day!) Okay, so over all, great poem. You had a steady constant flow and none of the rhymes felt forced. But ...

Hey! So, I don't usually like reviewing anything over a week old (By that point the writers are usually done editing) but I this came up in the 'You haven't ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! So this review is gonna stay short- The only thing I really had a problem with was this last line It turned out that I was the ...

Hey, ChocolateCello here! So a few times throughout the poem you have lines like this- No one pays attention, no one but I, but as they move they darken, slowly ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Okay, this poem was definitely interesting. I really liked the story in it but I'm questioning your set up. Occasionally, with no real pattern, you'll have two ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! This poem was written beautifully. The flow, the vocabulary and the 'story' all tied together perfectly. It was the ideal length too, not dragging on. I really ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! I loved the meaning behind this and I think it pretty much summed society up perfectly. A few suggestions though. "Wear our clothes and talk like us, ...

Hey! ChocolateCello here! Okay, so saw a bit of the chaos over the whole pause things... I really liked the breaks though. I don't usually read things that make you ...