ChocolateCello

Hello! ChocolateCello here! I liked the concept of this poem but I think you have a lot of opportunities for adjustment and growth too. I'm curious firstly as to what ...

Hello! Cello here hoping to give some helpful feedback. I'll break things down and go line by line. Being a Poet is so awesome and cool Being a Poet is ...

Hey! Cello here for a quick review! I liked this work- the last stanza especially, but I'd love to help you find some places you could improve. I'll work through ...

'Ello, it's Cello. This poem had a good pattern and strong concept but it has some places you could polish it up to really make it shine. It’s risky It’s ...

'Ello, it's cello. This is a beautiful poem! I'm not good with introductions so I'll go straight into edits. First I'd like to talk about formatting. I love seeing poets ...

'Ello, it's Cello here for a review. Over all, this poem was very nice. It has a solid base and a good tone to it, but I was hoping I ...

'Ello, it's Cello who's struggling to get back in the reviewing game. Let's just jump in (I'm not one for flowing reviews, sorry) Living near the forest, I cannot hear ...

'Ello, it's Cello! Welcome to the site. I really enjoyed this poem but I spotted a few places where it could improve with it's message and gain some more of ...

'Ello, it's Cello, here to review. Let's jump right in. I get that this poem is supposed to be simply and repetitive to prove a point and keep a patten, ...

'Ello, it's Cello. Let's get to it. Although I'm all for queer-themed writing, I wasn't a fan of this poem. I think the choice to rhyme took a lot away ...

'Ello, it's Cello. Let's just start. I like to work paragraph by paragraph. Oh you look good some may say. What is looking good? Who really actually cares that you ...

'Ello, it's Cello! I have not read the first chapter of this story so I'll have to focus on general things during this review oppose to character and plot development. ...

'Ello, it's Cello! Here to review on this lovely day. Well... this was interesting for sure. Let's go by sections. It was a warm summer night, Senpai Marco and i ...

'Ello, it's Cello! I'd like to offer a late welcome to the site! I hope you're enjoying it here! I haven't read the previous chapters of this story so I ...

'Ello, it's Cello, here for a review! Let's start with punctuation. First I'd like to focus on your ellipsises (An ellipsis is three dots ... ). You use them constantly ...