This is ZeldaIsShiek for one last review until I take a break until tomorrow. Review Day has been fun, and I'll return tomorrow, but it's about time for me to start *thinking about* getting a bit of sleep between the reviews. Let's get into this incredible poem!
This is obviously a poem about having a child and becoming a mother, but it's more than that. It's about a mother whose mother was not a mother, but a captor and someone who did not let their child be who they wanted, but forced them to be who they wanted their children to be and held them to every action they took. I can't prove the details, but the line "and be the mother you couldn't be" should be enough to justify the theory that her mother was not the best, and that she wants to make up for that by proving she can be a better mother than hers.
The part about her being accepting of whatever her child wants regardless of their gender is something that is very important to being a mother, and is probably something that her mother did not do for her when she was a child, prompting her to write the wrongs of the precious generation and let her children be whoever they want to be.
That's all I have for today. It's really a great piece of work, but nothing was wrong with it. It was nearly perfect! Just astounding, and worth a follow alone! ZeldaIsShiek- Out!
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