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Twinkle! =) This is definitely a good story, thought just a lot descriptions coming in, so it left me a little... Maybe to the off-zone? But once, something spooked up, ...

Hey Fub! xD Now, this was a really nice poem! I have absolutely no words to it, because its perfect but only ONE tiny mistake. You're missing on QUESTION MARKS. ...

Noelle! ;D I found this piece extremely fun to read and I love the character of Nia in this. She is absolutely random and I'm reading this in the night, ...

Hi Darth! :] I loved this poem, it was nice and I see you've written this with all your heart content. I like it, though, I think you're just slightly ...

This would be good, if you could just bring in the spaces between the lines, because sometimes confusing and you just find yourself reading the same line over and over ...

Hi Twinkle! (: So, I think the whole lot of the story (nightmare xP) was scary if you actually imagine each and every word of it, and I did that ...

Solvvyy! Here to review just like you asked me too. ^o^ Actually, this story doesn't really need to be corrected nor edited. It was simply beautiful and it felt really ...

Just like everyone said. Really nice.

Via! (: Great poem. In fact, very random and I completely agree with you. That simplicity of colors are gone, and everyone now just wants so many bright colors. *sigh* ...

Hey Babymagic18! I can see this poem needs a little formatting and editing to do. Not little, lots actually. First cut off, the poem has lines that are too big ...

Hey Granger! Well, this might have been an interesting poem if it was a little more edited and some mistakes corrected because this seemed very confusing. I wouldn't this was ...

Hey Phantom! :) That's a nice poem you've got here. ^^ It's kind of different, comparing a girl to snow. The only weird thing was that, you called the poem ...

You should read this when you're listening to Demi Lovato's- Give Your Heart A Break . It'll make you really sad. :( BUT, THIS WAS AMAZING! BEAUTIFUL. I don't think ...

Hi Jas! I loved this poem! Though I think you could change the title of the poem a little bit because it isn't so appropriate but never mind though! I ...

Hey Monolith! I liked the idea of the poem very much and I think you've done a great job with rhyming everything. I see you've taken this rhyming position > ...