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Re: Anger
hey! a short review you can say: despite of being of just few lines, it was so strong. the message is just shouting out loud. i am just in love ...
Feb 9, 2020 -
Re: Sorry love
hey! chitz here for a review after long. starting from the start , i want to say, reading this made me sad. its just heart breaking to think of your ...
Feb 9, 2020 -
Re: From the first day...
hey buddy, chitz here for a review, after very long. so starting with this, i must tell you i hate reading long long unless, unless one has a sticking start. ...
Feb 9, 2020 -
Re: Lies
hey ~ greetings of the day this piece about 'lies' can better be turned into a rap i think . or i was the one reading it in the weird ...
Mar 8, 2019 -
Re: Exploring
hey EagleFly! greetings of the day. this piece or poem or poetry, it is really interesting and funny to read. you presented that exploration of yours with so few words ...
Mar 8, 2019 -
Re: The Last Night
hey! greetings of the day shahina. this piece of yours really appeals to me . that night, crying holding tight onto the pillow, wanting those days to return and everything. ...
Mar 8, 2019 -
Re: Crush( first poem) plz check it out
hey amna ! greetings to you. welcome to YWS on the first go. hope you are enjoying it here. secondly, congrats for your first piece. now, you have taken up ...
Mar 8, 2019 -
Re: To Hear Your Voice
greetings 1 nspire! firstly. loved this . it is so good. the plot is amazing. you waiting for the phone call. and the way you presented it is lit. the ...
Nov 24, 2018 -
Re: you
hey! greetings clancy. the poem sounds emotional. i really didn't got the meaning of the lines: "strong enough not to think (like you) strong enough not to feel (like you)" ...
Nov 24, 2018 -
Re: Freak Fred 2
hey littleredsstoryline! you are certainly talking about the character Fred from the show 'Courage The Cowardly Dog'. oh it was awesome. i spent my childhood watchin it. incredible courageous dog. ...
Sep 27, 2018 -
Re: Through The Mind Of A 21 Year Old Indian Girl
hey! vluvs. my friend and i were discussing about this same topic this day. though we both are not in the same stage of adulthood as you, but we still ...
Sep 27, 2018 -
Re: Heartbreak
greetings to the two collaborators. amazing work! the comparison with rain and thunder was absolutely in place. it felt very nice to read it. the description of your longings for ...
Aug 11, 2018 -
Re: Loss
greetings to TheWeirdoFromBeyond! your piece touches the heart upon the first reading. Beautifully written 'loss' describes the utter pain of separation from someone who owns your heart . Hence, comme
Aug 5, 2018 -
Re: That Girl
Hey! It seems many people can relate to your work and indeed I also did. You have excellently presented the conditions that a not so girly flirty and open girl ...
May 16, 2018 -
Re: A Writers Valentine's Day
Hey! Here for a quick review. Its short and sweet. The topic is good even. Valentines is not the same for everyone and for a writer it is something even ...
Feb 28, 2018
