Hello, here to review!
Although it's short it so strong! I get what you are saying in only 6 short lines. The whole short poem is like a hook. I want more but I know I won't get it. I don't know if this is a truth of your life but either way it is heartbreaking. You make it have so much emotion so much sadness by just saying four words at the end. "enjoy anything ever again". That right there made me just sit and stare at the words and just think. Those are strong words that you put in this poem that packed a punch.
I want a story that again I know I won't get but I just urge to know more about everything.
Really great job, I will be reading more of your work!
_ from your friend,
@PlainandSimple _
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