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ChipsMcCoy

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Kings of the Skies Chapter 1 - Shots Fired

    Hey, as requested I'll be reviewing your chapter. Well, I'm not an expert on chapters myself, so bear with me. Nevertheless, I'll try my best. I thought, overall this was ...

    Aug 6, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: I'm Gonna Tell You a Story

    Hello, Chips here with a review. Well, I liked that you had a clear narrative and that your poem is arranged in stanzas which visually look like the match the ...

    Aug 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Other Re: for my future wife, whom I love.

    Hello, I'll be reviewing your poem. Well, I guess we have to have a future plan right? I actually found this poem humorous at some points, that probably wasn't intended ...

    Aug 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Leave a message after the BEEP!

    Hi, I'll be reviewing your poem. I found the poem to be very realistic, it seemed like perhaps a break-up in a relationship. I think you organised your stanzas neatly ...

    Aug 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Love or lust

    Hello, Chips here with a review. This was an interesting poem, love and lust are two things some may struggle to distinguish and your poem seemed to distinguish the difference ...

    Aug 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Romantic Re: Best Friends Forever

    Hey, I'll be reviewing your poem today. This seems like a personal piece of poetry, it was light-hearted and it had a clear narrative. But with the formatting and prominent ...

    Aug 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: For You

    Hello, I'll be reviewing your poem. I found this to be an interesting collection of poems on the theme of love I presume, I liked how you split up each ...

    Aug 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Realistic, Lyrical Re: Got a Beautiful Life

    Hey, I'll be reviewing you poem. Overall, I liked the positive aspects of life you mentioned and the good things it brings and so forth. I also feel like the ...

    Aug 2, 2015
  • Poetry » Narrative, Other Re: Intoxicating Secrets

    Hello, CarnivorousButterfly! Welcome to YWS, congrats on writing your first poem. I'll be reviewing your poem today. I liked the title of your poem it's very intriguing. And the topic ...

    Jun 20, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Humor Re: Text Me?

    Hello, WaltzingDreams! I'll be reviewing your poem today. I understand what you were trying to convey here and it has a lot of potential so I have some suggestions that ...

    Jun 20, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: I listen to audiobooks.

    Hello, Chips here with a review! Firstly congratulations on getting featured, it was well deserved. I really, liked this poem, its seems like a topic many people could relate with ...

    Jan 4, 2015
  • Poetry » Spiritual, General Re: Eden

    Hello, Chips here with a review. I love the concept of Eden in your poem, it's always great to see spiritual works on here, they're quite refreshing. As much as ...

    Dec 29, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Exist

    Hello, Chips here to write a review! It's been a while since I've reviewed, so hopefully this review makes more sense than nonsense. So into the review: Well, I thought ...

    Oct 28, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Bitter Sweet

    Hello, Chips here with a review. I liked the title you chose, although it's quite a popular one I've seen. You used some nice descriptions, I liked the ending most ...

    Aug 28, 2014
  • Poetry » Realistic, Satire Re: By The Way, Your Mascara Is Smeared

    Hey, Chips here with a review. I liked how you made this poem seem personal so that the reader could easily relate with it. The momentum built up was written ...

    Aug 28, 2014


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