Chinku

Hi there Giginicole17! it's chinku. The above poem says an intense and beautiful tale about a person (if I'm not wrong) and his/her love, where he or she does have ...

Hi there "B" It's a nice work with well placement of word, though it's short in format but with an intense meaning. The second stanza clearly gives the meaning of ...

Hi smile. The poem seems nice, withe the concept of winter, spring and summer seasons with your pretty memories and your emotions accomplishing it very well. Regarding grammatical mistake "the ...

Hi there Muzzammil, It's a beautiful poem giving a full deep meaning/sense of sport and the the character of game to unite people from different places. I like the way ...

Hi Eros, So glad to read your poem, the poem describes the beauty of shark with a nice flow like a shark swims in a deep ocean. Each of the ...

Hi, So nice, daydreams of children and adults during the lectures, the mind flies in the sky like a bird mean while the lazy body rests on the chair. Finally ...

Hi, That's beautiful reminding someone to look forward rather than getting depressed living with inferior thoughts of society. "you've spent your whole life staring at the ground. don't you think ...

hi there, its a beautiful work. i loved it. you wrote very well by giving all the realistic facts, how people behave nowadays. i love the line where you have ...

Hi Bella rke, it's a sweet and beautiful work. having a deep meaning and emotions making the poem beauty. the first stanza gives a sweetness feeling of kids. even, it's ...

hi there, it's a very beautiful poem yo have written. it shows how inferior feelings we get before expressing it. choice of words and placements are nice. i would like ...

hi there, i truly love your work. It relates to my thoughts and also it relates to everyone's thought of childhood, childhood memories. you well described the childhood days, memories, ...

hi there, it's a nice work with a painful expression that someone have suffered a lot through her adulthood and also by the family and relatives . it's little painful. ...

hi Amelie, The meaning of the poem is quite deep and it's amazing too, you have executed all the things in a perfect manner . Here i would like to ...

hi, it's chinku. well, the poem is beautiful explaining a persons attraction towards the a beautiful lady, like a love at first site. it gives a true feeling of attraction ...

hi, it's ajit. the poem is full of emotion which i loved, it shows the regular feelings of a human being, how she/he feels when someone breaks the heart, how ...