Chevy

and only we know know the reality of summer I love this one, great ending. Are there supposed to be two knows? Great either way. Yeah...it's supposed to they're the ...

You have to start out by sending them to magazines..or, just write a book of poetry. Find poetry publishers..and well, voila. I know a kid who did that..seemed to work ...

It definitely needs more. As of now, it seems like a low-budget horror film that you can rent from Blockbuster for 2 weeks that no one cares about.

I would have to say I envy your cleverness...I could never do anything like this. I can relate to this poem VERY well...I loved it even though I don't exactly ...

Yeah one day I'll turn it into a proper story because I never seem to forget this event. I always remember it so well.

Wow! I. Morgan Harper wrote a poem with a point. It's time to celebrate now.

oh gosh...please...someone...could you please comment on this???

thank you so much. i was afraid i wouldn't get any feedback on this but it looks like i did! thanks!

Same thing Liz said. Not TBR Liz...but the Liz above me.

eh...

I've really been experimenting with a different kind of writing lately. Perhaps it wasn't such a good thing because now all of my poems remain a mystery and are empty.

I loved the title because we had a thunderstorm last night. *Sighs* Once again, I didn't fully understand it. But it was worded beautifully and very easy to read.

The first two stanzas confused me until I read the rest. Meaning I had to read it twice before it could actually mean something. I guess that could be good...or ...

There's something about this poem... Aha! Yes! It reminds of this other poem I read. I wish I could recall the title or the author. But it was slightly longer ...

drab/lengthy/narrative i try not to be so negative. i try...