Paper Boy
By Morgan Harper
Verse One
saturday
same routine
goind down
the same old streets
Pre Chorus
tell me what you're thinking
what are you thinking
Chorus
your closet hopes
your distant dreams
life is harder
than it seems
do you know peace
do you know joy
(tell me) what's on your mind
paper boy
Verse Two
very nice
brand new bike
you're still out
the same old route
Pre Chorus
tell me what you're thinking
what are you thinking
Bridge
pass the stop sign
the highway is clear
did they tell you
you can't get there from here
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I finally figured out the music for it last night! YAY! But I fell asleep ontop of a electric guitar and an acoustic on my leg...I woke up this morning--I had forgotten it.
wow, it flows really well. Nice one!
thank you so much. i was afraid i wouldn't get any feedback on this but it looks like i did! thanks!
sweet....I really liked the rythm. Wish I could hear the tune...
I really liked the last line...that was my favorite.
cheers CL